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watergates/ Country Of Light


 A flag of stripes color held
the birth of a nation
filled with freedom a bell

liberty for peace
day's filtered light
protection for justice
from the dreams 
of each plight

candles that burned
to sensor the way
the past
had been lived in
to make better this day

rules that weren't followed
security from all
the ways of correction
taped then recalled

as dogs of a pair
with ears long and brown
companions for leaders
now buried in grounds

plenty of voices
from echoing calls
barbed wire reaches
now lined against walls

a calling to share
with us your way
strength of your country
by words you say

to live
love with freedom
the care that we need
sharing truths of this country
please help us be free

before life's extinction 
we plead for your hand
to feel see our sorrows
deliver us if you can






— mantiscepter, Mar 25, 2010

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

I like it

I don't have much to say but, i really liked it. keep it up. I'll come back later to make a better comment. Odi et Amo ( I love and I hate)
M

mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

our welfare in mind???

thanx for stopping by alice, and for the kind words written. Usually I am never political. But some times you have to ring a bell of criticism, even if it's just to let yourself know what is, and what was. simile is a product of breeding, [ Are we all the same??] No, are we taught,and do we follow as myrmidons under the threat of being different,or swimming up, instead of down the proverbial staircase. but if eyes are open to the reality of indifference. we have a chance to be at least noticed as an individual and openly share our Idea's. Mantiscepter.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear John

Nice message in this one ... I have a bit of a passion for history ... the liberty bell and the stories surrounding it have always fascinated me the moving of it and the new bell thats what your poem reminded me of ... Pass and Stowe made the bell I think that was their names anyway lol Just so you know I am not totally clueless lol theres a message in this that most free societies can take something away from it love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
M

mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Chaos in the white house

I will send a private message later. glad you stopped in. I was sleeping. have a beautiful night. nice little story. and by the by I will try to write the something, I could not find........ By love John.