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Mar 25, 2010
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Your dancing eyes
I watch with interest
As your eyes darken
And smolder when they look at me
What is it that makes your eyes dance
Your eyes dance with mischief
As I walk cautiously into the room
I can tell by your eyes
That your dancing with the devil tonight
Your laughing eyes dance
Dazzling circles around me
I'm caught, frozen
By the beauty of their dance
Even as you cry
Your tears dance with your eyes
This dance is sad and lonely
But beautiful none the less
No matter the emotion
Your eyes dance
Stunning me with their beauty
Every last time they dance
No one can match the beauty
Of your dancing eyes
They entice me, carrying me
With the dance so that I see
Why your eyes dance
You may lie with your mouth
But, your eyes always tell me
The truth, you can hide nothing
With your beautiful dancing eyes
The Truth they speak with every twirl
Theres no mystery in your eyes
Only the dance of your soul
That is why I know
That you love me
You say it and I look
To your eyes and see the truth
Love me you do
You say it
Your eyes dance it
The truth I'll always know it
------Alice to a very good friend! :D Your awsome man. :D i hope you guys like it. give me your honest opinion
As your eyes darken
And smolder when they look at me
What is it that makes your eyes dance
Your eyes dance with mischief
As I walk cautiously into the room
I can tell by your eyes
That your dancing with the devil tonight
Your laughing eyes dance
Dazzling circles around me
I'm caught, frozen
By the beauty of their dance
Even as you cry
Your tears dance with your eyes
This dance is sad and lonely
But beautiful none the less
No matter the emotion
Your eyes dance
Stunning me with their beauty
Every last time they dance
No one can match the beauty
Of your dancing eyes
They entice me, carrying me
With the dance so that I see
Why your eyes dance
You may lie with your mouth
But, your eyes always tell me
The truth, you can hide nothing
With your beautiful dancing eyes
The Truth they speak with every twirl
Theres no mystery in your eyes
Only the dance of your soul
That is why I know
That you love me
You say it and I look
To your eyes and see the truth
Love me you do
You say it
Your eyes dance it
The truth I'll always know it
------Alice to a very good friend! :D Your awsome man. :D i hope you guys like it. give me your honest opinion
— Alice Ember, Mar 25, 2010
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Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
come on
Silent_Rain
16 years 2 months ago
Wow
Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
That is true
Silent_Rain
16 years 2 months ago
AWW!!
Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
Yes you did
jim
16 years 2 months ago
Nice
Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Jim.
loved
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LOVED
Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks