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Birthday wish ( for my darling )


tell me
who owns the light
in the corner of your eye
who owns the grass
and the fields
where you walk

who owns the meadows of heaven
the white clouds
the verdure
and the apple orchard
where you stand

tell me
you own the scent
you own the sun and laughter
you own all this
the happy games smiles and jumps

you own the hands touch
against your soft cheek
you own your legs movement
through tickling summer winds

you own the pure breath
of the violet and the lily of the valley
you own everything
as today
the taste of caramel
cake and ice cream

so play sing and fly
on your birthday
my darling
in my heart my sweet
I hear your ringing laughter
— odd molly, Mar 25, 2010

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful,

It's a beautiful poem, full of vigour, and a lot of love...
OM

odd molly

16 years 2 months ago

Thank You RL for reading my

Thank You RL for reading my poem. Yes, nothing is more beautiful than a birthday because it is such a heavenly blessing. love. o molly
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Oh, Molly!!!!!!!!!~AWords

Oh, Molly!!!!!!!!! ~A Words must be used like stepping stones: lightly and with nimbleness, because if you step on them too heavily, you incur the danger of falling into the intellectual mire of logic and reason. - Balsekar
OM

odd molly

16 years 2 months ago

Dear A.Thank You so much

Dear A. Thank You so much ! love and love o molly ps I so love the wisdom words by Balsekar. So true ! and your picture reminds me Georgia o Keefe's paintings.. just beautiful !
CN

Craig Norris

16 years 2 months ago

there is certainly

a child in me, and he thanks you for this gift o molly, as does the man. It is up to us to own our days, I thank you for this beautiful reminder, that light in the corner of my eye. Love. Craig
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 2 months ago

Ah just what the doctor ordered!

Hi Molly and happy easter to you! This poem is just what the doctor ordered on a birthday... light, uplifting, gleeful, envigorating and full of giving spirit! You place us all there sing a Happy Birthday song... laughing, cheering and clapping along in a smiling party vibe! After that we all pull out the streamers, party poppers, conical hats and balloons and have a happy time joining in with the celebrations... encourages the child in my soul to come out and be merry. A great poem, so full of energy and is so, so right for a birthday wish. Great write Molly! Dale :)
OM

odd molly

16 years 2 months ago

Yes Dale.. I am totally in

Yes Dale.. I am totally in love with birthdays and birthday parties Ive always been and will always be.. it is such a lovely and happy thing. when is your birthday ? Thank you for reading my poetry Dale it is an honour to have you here at my page. love. o molly
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 2 months ago

Molly!

Molly, the honour is all mine... you are a far better writer than I, with such wonderful verse and feeling in your word as write such graceful poetry. I think you love evrything joyful in your heart Molly because that is who you are! Oh and I'll tell you when my birthday is if you tell me when yours is lol! Thanks for sharing your wondrous thoughts and spirit with us all! Dale :)
S

Sensoul

16 years 1 month ago

Odd Molly, jeg skriver på

Odd Molly, jeg skriver på norsk, jeg har alltid tyckt så mycket om dine dikt,og alltid var det slik at jeg ikke behøvde å si noe, fordi du sa det slik det var,helt fullstendig...slik er det forsatt. Du er en av de få her i verden som får meg til å tie, fordi ord ikke behøves...Nydelig, som alltid:)) og jeg ønsker deg alt godt...som alltid...Liv
OM

odd molly

16 years 1 month ago

Hej Liv. Så fint att höra

Hej Liv. Så fint att höra ifrån dig. Dina ord värmer mitt hjärta och om det är som du säger att du inte behöver säga något så känner jag att jag har lyckats och jag skulle kunna skriva bara för dig. Hoppas att du har det bra därborta i Norge och att inte molnet från vulkanen hindrar solen att komma fram. Nu ber jag att inte Katla vaknar. Love och Kärlek o molly