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Mar 25, 2010
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Birthday wish ( for my darling )
tell me
who owns the light
in the corner of your eye
who owns the grass
and the fields
where you walk
who owns the meadows of heaven
the white clouds
the verdure
and the apple orchard
where you stand
tell me
you own the scent
you own the sun and laughter
you own all this
the happy games smiles and jumps
you own the hands touch
against your soft cheek
you own your legs movement
through tickling summer winds
you own the pure breath
of the violet and the lily of the valley
you own everything
as today
the taste of caramel
cake and ice cream
so play sing and fly
on your birthday
my darling
in my heart my sweet
I hear your ringing laughter
— odd molly, Mar 25, 2010
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Roscoe Lane
16 years 2 months ago
Beautiful,
odd molly
16 years 2 months ago
Thank You RL for reading my
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Oh, Molly!!!!!!!!!~AWords
odd molly
16 years 2 months ago
Dear A.Thank You so much
odd molly
16 years 2 months ago
I think there is a child in
Craig Norris
16 years 2 months ago
there is certainly
odd molly
16 years 2 months ago
tu senti, amore, come il mio
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 2 months ago
Ah just what the doctor ordered!
odd molly
16 years 2 months ago
Yes Dale.. I am totally in
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 2 months ago
Molly!
Sensoul
16 years 1 month ago
Odd Molly, jeg skriver på
odd molly
16 years 1 month ago
Hej Liv. Så fint att höra