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THE JEWEL WITHIN YOUR FACE
I will always love you
with all your lovely ways.
And that precious little smile of yours
the jewel within your face.
We danced a lot in the early days
as you warmed my heart in so many ways.
I couldn’t help but fall in love
for you were my angel, sent from above.
There is a song of a ‘Lady in Red’
with you it was a little brown dress!
So simple in its shape and design
but in it you looked so divine.
Little things are special for me and you
like that night alone with you.
When we looked up to the stars, in early spring
and to us it meant everything.
Our life together continues on
but the little brown dress, sadly has gone.
Time has passed, the dancing has too
but I am still in love with you.
I will always love you
with all your lovely ways.
And that precious little smile of yours
the jewel within your face.
Critiques
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
so lovely
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
thank you Judy, I was a
Bonitaj
16 years 2 months ago
I love how
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
thank you, and that one line
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Great one again
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
thank you, very nice of you