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the Birth of Destiny
As dark and light merged,
in the touch of fingers
a passover was made
this coupling foretold
that destiny,
would be born
pushed from the cusp
of two worlds,
leaving halos and horns
in a stillness, that ever
sighs of her departure
A single green blade
freed the earth
stealing her first breath,
as tips of flowers interlaced,
it shimmered within her
first dew kissed sleep
observed by immortals
(from both sides)
her fingers painted air,
as feet ran its first steps
creating winds through time,
gasps echoed the heavens
(a gathering had watched)
In awe
their desire
had been to keep her,
sacrificing their love
they gave this beauty
a life, purpose
a smile
at the end laughter
the comma
in the birth of tears,
became a lighted hope
that embers
all covet her
this galaxy of beauty
born on the cusp,
passed us all today
and walks among us
(immortals maintain their gaze)
and destiny? found me
as I write on her tail,
and touch the profound
Critiques
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
you just outdo yourself evey time don't you my mate?
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judd
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Jayne-Chloe
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Cat
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Ephy
raskin
16 years 2 months ago
Lovely Jayne, raskin
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Raskin
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Dale
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
A true artist a work
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Xena
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
i bow.MumWords must be used
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Mum
Clem
16 years 2 months ago
Permission
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Clem ~!
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Awesome
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
This ones one of my
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 2 months ago
hi there
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Ross that is a great
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Fucking brilliant, that’s
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Fucking brilliant will do me
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Well then it should do you
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Oh trust me i have days
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Bollocks! I highly doubt
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
LMAO Alex I have a few brit
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Finally I've allowed myself to catch up
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
one persons angel is
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
You touch the profound
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Ah to be the creator of