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Mar 24, 2010
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Seeking Happiness
Kind sir
Please direct me
On the road of happiness
I was told that it’s easy to find
Do you know where it may be
If so please let me know?
Weary from the travelling
I doubt if I can make it
Through the night
Sir I beg of you
To show me the land
Of eternal glee
What, it doesn’t exist
Surely, you must be wrong
There must be an explanation
In the town of agony
One told me to find happiness
He said the villagers would guide me
How can it be
That joy lives within
Am I that blind
To have not noticed
Such pleasure
— paul, Mar 24, 2010
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Mr.peoms
16 years 2 months ago
This poem is okay I
Mark
16 years 2 months ago
Mr.peoms
Mark
16 years 2 months ago
Paul
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
who is "kind sir"?