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Their Song

 Stars crawl
From alabaster clouds
Of sunsets
That have gone

Bringing times
I most enjoyed
The forgotten
I've since longed

Hidden dreams
From time's lost
A mind
Floats gently on 

With burning warmth
These memories deep
do touch
A wanted song

As  pass this time
A sullen Life
I've yes held
So strong

To face the future
I'm at it's end
Held were dreams
My silent Friends 

— mantiscepter, Mar 24, 2010

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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

Stars

Thanx lonnie, I'm happy to hear you like this poem, it was kind of you to stop and comment. hope we cross paths again. and is nice to meet you. John Mantiscepter
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear John

Beautifully written ... only one thing is the second last line were/where ?? lol love and hugs Jayne-Chloe
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mantiscepter

16 years 2 months ago

WERE

[WERE]. How are ya love; good to hear from you , it always make my morning a happy one. glad you liked the poem and how are you this fine day, course I know you're snoring right now, and you will read this later..I pray all is good, and hope to hear from you again. Love John. PS if you like where you can put it in..... bye bye.