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ON HER WINGS
Not so long ago, the journey of life became hard and difficult.
a troubled mind made the waters seem too deep and stormy.
a weakened spirit made the hills feel steep and hard to climb.
a weary heart made the paths seem long and endless.
And the land of hope, joy and peace became distant and impossible to reach.
Then, that special person in your life took control of your journey,
with her kindness, her patience and her love. And like an Angel,
on her wings she guided you through the waters which gradually became shallow and calm
on her wings she carried you up through the hills and they became easier to climb
on her wings she took you along the paths and they were long and endless no more.
And now the land of hope, joy and peace, though still some distance away,
seems to be within reach again.
Critiques
raskin
16 years 2 months ago
Very nice tribute to a
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Tim
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
thanks for the encouragement
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Great beautiful poem of yours
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
thank you–the poem