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Lenny of Cohen
Mar 23, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Black Abyss

brain falls into black
abyss which gently
suffocates me

electric angels
prod me awake

death hasn't quite
caught this journeyman

the spider bides his time
and the fly stalks me

and I discreetly
abide in the moment



Lenny Gazbowski(C)2010
— Lenny of Cohen, Mar 23, 2010

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dylan thomas

"Do not go gentle into that good night, ... Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Fuck discreetly abiding in the moment. Cheers, Jess, Screw copyright, my poetry belongs to the world, no charge, property is theft. But an acknowledgment might be nice.