Somewhere

orsm poem but sad love hubby xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Somewhere is always here... either in physicality or imagination. Imagine deep enough and a universe is being created. Love, Mummy Words must be used like stepping stones: lightly and with nimbleness, because if you step on them too heavily, you incur the danger of falling into the intellectual mire of logic and reason. - Balsekar

Beautiful Jayne. Sounds like I've been there and back and found something. Maybe not what I was looking for, but something is better than nothing and these few words paint a much larger picture. Rosina xena465

SOMEWHERE I READ THIS PIECE YET I DON'T REMEMBER WHERE YES HOLD IT IT WAS THERE THERE THERE NOTE PLEASE DO A FAVOUR REMOVE THE T .....ALL TEES ...THANK U LOVED

i aspire to the idea of the multiverse - where everything that could happen does. then somewhere....... love it JC judd xxx

hi a ten years old poem by you wow jayne you were always a poet even then and ever since brill ,,,,,,,,ziggy

Some-where-ness:- "The humbler ones concept of beauty,  the more likely one is to find it"  John Clare. apropos the above:- " I love the muse who sits her down  Upon the molehills little lap  Who feels no fear to stain her gown   And pauses by the hedgerow gap"   ( The Flitting) John Clare ** ** ** ** ** Those who seek fame and profit Little know the peace of the hills. Morning and evening the clear air blows Between heaven and earth my life exists, My lungs expand, my body functions at ease. If I think of other places nowhere attracts, If I think of this place nowhere distracts,            The moon waxes full            The pure winds blow. Kenzan and his tradition. Bernard Leach. "A Potter's Book" This is close to what I want to say to this poem, I love it Jayne, dear you in your old papers come thoughts that are precious moments here and now. My love to you from Ann

Always a poet. Simply amazing, the things that make us what we are, come back to us, time after time, to make someone different, yet again. Hig bugs, and lotta love, ~ Gee

Sounds where I need to be just now.. I liked the simplicity of this Jayne Seabhac

I would delete it or find something with more oomph, it's a bit plaintive. Cheers, Jess, Screw copyright, my poetry belongs to the world, no charge, property is theft. But an acknowledgment might be nice.

yes, I've been there... along time ago. *sigh... Love, Cat

one of your shorter poems, a delightful read, I can relate. xoxo Jhena

i connected with the message moment after reading it. its a poem short but very deep in meaning.

I think I missed something 'SOMEWHERE'! What was that last line! Provocative write nonetheless! Reminds me of that Linda Rondstadt song - SOMEWHERE OUT THERE! Loved it! Cheers Bonita j ps Scribble of yours are becoming as valuable as finding an old Picasso note pad! ;)

I just can't keep up with you doll... I love the sounds the words make...and even back then you had a special talent for wordplay. I always get to your poems too late to say anything that doesn't sound like a rehash of others thoughts! Just lovely...(sigh) Ells x

Daer S., I read it, and I smiled because I thought you were making light. Then I read the comments from everyone, and I thought I missed something. So, I read it again, and it still made me smile. I like it just the way it is. I love the play on the word cadence, and the way you bring it all together in the end. P.