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Mar 23, 2010
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Burnt Beginnings
Burnt beginnings
by: Eddy Styx
Rosebud of desire
blooming
hotly centered
in spirited passion
awaking from her dream
still looming
languidly
stretching dainty limbs
silky laughter
on soft full lips
the warmth of her voice
fills me
with all the vibrations
echoing of
strains of silken laughter
~*~
Come drift
into softest night
away from
the sun's glaring rays
escape
from the busy day's plights
chaotic passion
at dizzying heights
let's paint
a crimson blaze
across
the hazy azure sky
dance
the pulse
of our desire
tempt the dangers
of this fire
wild in rhythm
and out of control
*Another Eddy Styx poem (Eddy Styx is my male alter ego)
by: Eddy Styx
Rosebud of desire
blooming
hotly centered
in spirited passion
awaking from her dream
still looming
languidly
stretching dainty limbs
silky laughter
on soft full lips
the warmth of her voice
fills me
with all the vibrations
echoing of
strains of silken laughter
~*~
Come drift
into softest night
away from
the sun's glaring rays
escape
from the busy day's plights
chaotic passion
at dizzying heights
let's paint
a crimson blaze
across
the hazy azure sky
dance
the pulse
of our desire
tempt the dangers
of this fire
wild in rhythm
and out of control
*Another Eddy Styx poem (Eddy Styx is my male alter ego)
— Candlewitch, Mar 23, 2010
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Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Sign I love your Eddy Stix
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Hello Jayne-Chloe
Ink Dragon
16 years 2 months ago
I second Jayne, Cat,
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Nina
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
I love Ninas suggestion mine
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Eph!
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
hi cat
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Ziggy
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
"Silky Vibrations of Fire"
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Jess-Elf
themoonman
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Cat...
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Wow, Richard
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
This is really great Cat.
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Rosina
Mariposa
16 years 2 months ago
Lovely descriptions
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Hello
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
beautiful cat
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you, Judy!Love, Cat
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
nice meeting you!
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Chumfin
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
thanks to you ma'am