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Mar 23, 2010
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how the lotus blossoms in late March
like drunken gods
they stood
before one another
touched
and a universe was born
they spoke like brave-hearted poets
released from unholy banishment
words of love falling from
their succulent kisses
and
this is how their poetry was conceived
this is what I know of brilliant seas:
this alchemy of a man
and woman ascending
their fingers entwined
this is how the fog touched our feathers
like herons nesting
and writes our poems
this is how the lotus blossomed
beneath the fire in the sky
this is how I adore you
they stood
before one another
touched
and a universe was born
they spoke like brave-hearted poets
released from unholy banishment
words of love falling from
their succulent kisses
and
this is how their poetry was conceived
this is what I know of brilliant seas:
this alchemy of a man
and woman ascending
their fingers entwined
this is how the fog touched our feathers
like herons nesting
and writes our poems
this is how the lotus blossomed
beneath the fire in the sky
this is how I adore you
— Kailashana, Mar 23, 2010
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Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
BIG big sigh! From me.
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Mum
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
you sound so content anna
Mariposa
16 years 2 months ago
What a sensual poem!
RobertKnott
16 years 2 months ago
lovely