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Private Refuge

 this world
of bad and good
is a place where

there is a lot
 of exception  

seeing this 
many times 
and wondering.

saying that it's
not important to me
I feel free

and live on
with the thought
one day

the exception
will be me.
— mantiscepter, Mar 23, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear John

wonderful introspective poem ... I simply love your last two lines I have line envy I see nothing to a critique damn good my friend and nom'd :) love Jayne-Chloe x x x