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Mar 22, 2010
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I'm sorry
Being pulled apart
Piece by painful piece
I take all the blame
Because your putting it on me
You say it's my fault
And I guess it is
I thought I loved you
I don't think I really did
Again I call upon Lady Alana
Her strength, her bravery
Our beings merged
so, that I can work
On fighting the hell you put me in
You cry, i'm sad You scream in rage
I didn't mean to
I never meant to hurt you
Your pain brings me pain
And I don't know why
I can't stand the thought
Of doing you harm
Lady Alana is fighting the both of us
I don't want to give in
But, it's the only way I can save you
So, have a fun good life
I'm out of it
Live it the way you want
Love whoever you want
Be whoever you want
I'm sorry I didn't mean to
I didn't want to hurt you
I'm so sorry, man
Your my friend, but we're done
Piece by painful piece
I take all the blame
Because your putting it on me
You say it's my fault
And I guess it is
I thought I loved you
I don't think I really did
Again I call upon Lady Alana
Her strength, her bravery
Our beings merged
so, that I can work
On fighting the hell you put me in
You cry, i'm sad You scream in rage
I didn't mean to
I never meant to hurt you
Your pain brings me pain
And I don't know why
I can't stand the thought
Of doing you harm
Lady Alana is fighting the both of us
I don't want to give in
But, it's the only way I can save you
So, have a fun good life
I'm out of it
Live it the way you want
Love whoever you want
Be whoever you want
I'm sorry I didn't mean to
I didn't want to hurt you
I'm so sorry, man
Your my friend, but we're done
— Alice Ember, Mar 22, 2010
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Flowi
16 years 2 months ago
i enjoyed reading your poem,
Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Alice
Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
Very well done. Sad that
Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
You got that right
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
i love and enjoyed this
Alice Ember
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks. chumfin
Shayla rae
15 years 11 months ago
alice, you are a very