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i asked a child
“Who is God? I asked a child.
“The man who made the trees,” she said.
“The man who made them tall and strong.
He made them just for me.
He cries the rain to make them grow.
He loves them all you see,” she said.
“The Oak, the Gum, the Chestnut,
the Dogwood and Pine Tree.
He made the branches reach for Him.
And covered them with leaves,” she said.
“To give us shade and comfort,
and to show us different greens.
He made them so I could climb up high,
and all the world to see,” she said.
“That’s who God is. But He’s cross.
For we’re cutting down his trees.
Soon there’ll be none left to climb.
And the world we’ll never see,” she said.
“For if the trees all disappear,
there’ll be no more you or me.
For he made them so the Earth could breathe
And freshen up our air,” she said
“But we’re destroying our precious lungs
and the Earth will soon be bare.
And God may shed a billion tears,
for the loss of you and me.” she said
But he’ll weep a billion squared of them
For his greatest loss – his trees.”
Critiques
Silent_Rain
16 years 2 months ago
Wonderful!!
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
nice to meet you rain
Skybones777
16 years 2 months ago
Trees
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Just great
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
my magic mona
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
don't keep me in suspenders!!!!
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Judd I hadnt considered that
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
that's what i love about poetry - or one of the things anyway
loved
16 years 2 months ago
IF A CHILD ONLY KNEW
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hello loved
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Funny you should say that
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks rosina
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
i just called to say , good write.
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you so much chumfin
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
Judy,I’m not returning
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks tim !!!
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
you are welcome
xraycat
16 years 2 months ago
ah, thats really nice judy xx
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi cat !!!!