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Mar 22, 2010
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psychotic break
i spoke of a diverging road
of a diverging road i wrote
said i tread the path i dread
told you i'd make it through
but now i'm dead, yes, now i'm dead
lets cum together, in a life so dark
lets ignite the night, and create a spark
as i burn you in the fire we start
we'll rip ourselves apart
as we have sex and chocolate tarts.
an aching spine
a pompous bitch
see, love of mine
this bottomless ditch
i fall as i do
but i'll take you too
lets die together
"together, forever"
you and me, we're meant to be
yada yada yada, and something cheesy
and we end this night on a perfect note
as you stab my back as i slit your throat
ah! to us, i dedicate this ode
a diverging road, yes, a motherfucking road.
you will die, just as i did
a painful cry for a spineless bitch
a road to no end as i start again
on the path to the start where i began
talk to me in riddles as i do you for it
stare at me in wonder, i really don't give a shit
don't have much to live for,
lets just die and get it over with.
so i shall sum it up, love of mine
your temptation is a wonder, your love divine
your heat makes me sweat, be it a lie
whatever.
so lets get high and die.
together, forever.
of a diverging road i wrote
said i tread the path i dread
told you i'd make it through
but now i'm dead, yes, now i'm dead
lets cum together, in a life so dark
lets ignite the night, and create a spark
as i burn you in the fire we start
we'll rip ourselves apart
as we have sex and chocolate tarts.
an aching spine
a pompous bitch
see, love of mine
this bottomless ditch
i fall as i do
but i'll take you too
lets die together
"together, forever"
you and me, we're meant to be
yada yada yada, and something cheesy
and we end this night on a perfect note
as you stab my back as i slit your throat
ah! to us, i dedicate this ode
a diverging road, yes, a motherfucking road.
you will die, just as i did
a painful cry for a spineless bitch
a road to no end as i start again
on the path to the start where i began
talk to me in riddles as i do you for it
stare at me in wonder, i really don't give a shit
don't have much to live for,
lets just die and get it over with.
so i shall sum it up, love of mine
your temptation is a wonder, your love divine
your heat makes me sweat, be it a lie
whatever.
so lets get high and die.
together, forever.
— dhruv, Mar 22, 2010
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Critiques
franny50
16 years 2 months ago
Wow!
dhruv
16 years ago
:P
Beauregard
16 years 2 months ago
nothing is too vulgar here
dhruv
16 years ago
i know what you mean
Professor Purple
16 years ago
Woa! Real damn good! I read
dhruv
16 years ago
the biggest contrast here is