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STROLLING BY THE SEA
Winter has its sparkle, but not for me today
my thoughts have turned to summer, not so far away.
With mild and lighter evenings and days so warm and long
I think of all the things I can do, when summer comes along.
But I’ll just want to be with you and feel you close to me
walking hand in hand with you, strolling by the sea.
So I will take some time away, to be alone with you
and we will find a rocky cove, where the sea is blue.
As we watch the children play, we’ll wonder at it all
then I’ll steal a kiss from you, as the waves caress the shore.
And I’ll just want to be with you and feel you close to me
walking hand in hand with you strolling by the sea.
We’ll take a walk across the cliffs, up where the seagulls fly
and watch the sea crash on the rocks, as the clouds drift by.
Then we’ll stroll down to the beach, to find a shell or two
and watch the surf ride on the tide, just glad it’s me and you.
The winter has us in its grip, now snow has fallen too
but my thoughts are of summer days, just being alone with you.
Critiques
franny50
16 years 2 months ago
What a lovely poem.It flows
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
thanks very much, means a
raskin
16 years 2 months ago
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Tim
16 years 2 months ago
glad you liked, thanks for
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you!
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
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Tim
16 years 2 months ago
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