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loved
loved
Mar 22, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A SIMPE THOUGHT

Just a Thought

 

I always really thought

 

That summer ends…

 

And

 

Winter commences…

 

Once the love affair

 

Is legalised…

And

The honey moon is over

 

 

 

— loved, Mar 22, 2010

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loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

simplicity

its a virtue we all have yet to ombibe loved
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Sweet and as you say simple.

Ann of Norway I love Winter so its not something I fall into without eager anticipation. Know what you mean and as Theo says its just that. Sweet and as you say simple. Ann
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

stars

glad u gave three only stars i mean loved
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

hi loved

i have read this over and over, and i still can't decide if you are saying this is why your relationship ended - because you thought that and made it happen or if it is just a vaccuus thought and you don't really care if it is true or not. i'm expecting more words very clever lol judy
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

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i have replied as a special msg to u hope it answers ur query loved