LOVE ALONE

Love alone
but merge as one.divest your soul!let your mind come undone stop holding onto some cocked up schemethere's more to lifethan pursuing your dream the later is nebulousa tuft of cloud in thin air these are passions that burn!
Love - as only those who dare....

BjR 22 March '10

— Bonitaj, Mar 22, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

Critiques

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Boni

I loved this one sorry nothing to be critiqued ... smiles for miles loved that end line ;) very cheeky love Jayne-Chloe

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

dear sweet \jayne

|Somehow, in all your myriad of duties - you always find time to stop by! This was just a "quickie" so thanks! lol Boni

seabhac

16 years 2 months ago

Alone in love Boni

Alone in death Set dreams aside because they are not worth dreaming ? Grab the first guy that comes along and fuck him? Now who are you daring with this write? Someone has certainly pissed you off. Seabhac

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

Ah Seabhac

You know me well - or rather - how did you get inside my head ;) Truth is - everything we do in life is self-referring. Love, life, death - it all ends up "being alone"...or rather our experience of it is such. It's only by communication that we attempt to cross over that fragile bridge to another's island of selfhood. THanks for the comment! Boni