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Mar 21, 2010
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Thirteen Gods (with a second version for critique)
Thirteen Gods formed the world
They worked and worked to make it all
Twelve of them were well aquainted,
but one stood all alone
The centuries went by with man arising
To hold dominion upon the earth
The twelve watched over them
and cared for them in their way
but one still stood alone
They decided they should get to know him
So planned and thought and decided
They would invite him to dinner
Much to their regret, he accepted
The thirteenth God was Death!
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In the beginning were
thirteen Gods
That worked to create the world
Twelve of them were well aquainted,
but one stood all alone.
Centuries went by and man arose
To hold dominion on the earth
Twelve Gods watched over them
Caring for them in their special way,
but one still stood alone.
Faith, Hope and Charity
Called upon War, Pestillence and Greed
Who talked to Envy, Peace and Prosperity
Who visited Love, Hate and Pride
They decided they should get to know
The God who never visited.
So they planned and they thought
Finally, invited him to dinner.
Much to their regret, he accepted
After their dinner party.
The Gods were pensive
For much had been learned.
Filled with much unease
They went about the land,
There to see with their own eyes
The reason he stood alone
Soon they came to realize
He was both feared and needed
And man both prayed for and cursed
The name of the lonesome one
The thirteenth God was Death
They worked and worked to make it all
Twelve of them were well aquainted,
but one stood all alone
The centuries went by with man arising
To hold dominion upon the earth
The twelve watched over them
and cared for them in their way
but one still stood alone
They decided they should get to know him
So planned and thought and decided
They would invite him to dinner
Much to their regret, he accepted
The thirteenth God was Death!
__________________________________
In the beginning were
thirteen Gods
That worked to create the world
Twelve of them were well aquainted,
but one stood all alone.
Centuries went by and man arose
To hold dominion on the earth
Twelve Gods watched over them
Caring for them in their special way,
but one still stood alone.
Faith, Hope and Charity
Called upon War, Pestillence and Greed
Who talked to Envy, Peace and Prosperity
Who visited Love, Hate and Pride
They decided they should get to know
The God who never visited.
So they planned and they thought
Finally, invited him to dinner.
Much to their regret, he accepted
After their dinner party.
The Gods were pensive
For much had been learned.
Filled with much unease
They went about the land,
There to see with their own eyes
The reason he stood alone
Soon they came to realize
He was both feared and needed
And man both prayed for and cursed
The name of the lonesome one
The thirteenth God was Death
— Rett, Mar 21, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Gosh! That packed a punch at
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Xena
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Firstly
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Lyz.
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
P.S
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
It is my Novel Cover
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Great poem Rett
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Magics!
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Rett
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Wow, Thank you!
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Rett I love it when people
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Ahh, (I like to hear that
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
*LOL* thanks Kal
whitetea
16 years 2 months ago
>
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
*LOL*
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
so now it's the gods fault
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
*chuckle*
DawningDaytripper
16 years 2 months ago
Well I am tell you the
Beauregard
16 years 2 months ago
I don't know
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Julie, Kelsey
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Happy Easter to you Rett and the family
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Happy Easter Mona
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Indi, thanks you
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
*LOL* That's what I get
Beauregard
16 years 2 months ago
I love the update Rett!
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Hey, it's your fault
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Great revision Texan Man
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I loved the original and the
Rett
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Mona and Rosina