MAMA!!! (mother)

MAMA! (mother) Mama! Mama! Mama! Mama!Echoes the voice of relationshipA celestial bond, mortals questionEven, angels secretly want her treat Hitler too, reminisce in sweet nostalgia for herA gold pillar, memories immortalizes her idealsMama! You make our world go round.Tested specimen of true humanity A champion symbolizing selfless agapeYes! Love unlimited, your craftYour hospitality endeared angelsKindness and virtue you rabidly upholdYour industry, groomed limitless bowelsIntegrity, you impressed on your juvenile heartsBy a gentle kiss of correction,Pointing the pathway of honor to all Yet! Holding firmly the rodWith the rod, we were spared from blemish God’s ever-presence,Yet feels, mothers represent him all wherePlanting his field with love for all to eatLove is a mother Mama is real loveI guess up there above, he is a motherAn expert of difficult moments By knowledge, Many power, you empowered all withMama! Can all ever make it up to you?Your depth, an ocean of love can’t hastily fill A nation void of your touch Has its values torchedYour breast, cascade mans wisdomWeapons of war, dread your counselYour wisdom trains nation, Making peace bread for allTruly, none can do what you are Mama! Your secret tears, grease our path Same nourish us as flowers Your agonizing prayers,Heaven dare not despiseBy your thanksgiving, Heaven sets our stage Mama!I see heaven through your eyesYes! Am blessed to be your son You are really worthy to be called mama. “A beautiful dedication to al true MOTHERS.” Author: Felix Osaeghemede Joseph Email: [email protected];+2348037825027Written: 7/12/2007 to 7/1/2008.

— chumfin, Mar 21, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: KinG DaviD Psalms, King Solomon songs, maya angelou, and all the great poets i have ever meet.

Critiques

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

You write well

Even if personally I find it a bit sentimental. Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue.” Emma Goldman

chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

thank you!

you comment is appreciated thanks to you. best regards chumfin

chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

nice meeting you here.

it actually depends on the experience one may have had about some mum, am very sure that is the basis for which you may be talking from. but i want to say this , mothers are among the most beautiful gift God ever gave man. the Hitler reference here means no matter how devious a man is there is always a place in his heart for the mother. chumfin

magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Oh Chumfin

What a beautiful write for your mother and all mothers. So nice of you to share this piece here in Neopoet. I see you have a heart like a son does for his Mother, I as a daughter share the same lines with you. If you were graced with being raised by a Mother who loved you and guided you through life with all of our misgivings and she still stands for you well that and the love you share for one another is a love like no other. I love your poem. I know you asked for this: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly) No one in their right mind should oppressively give you any other wisecrack on this poem as you requested. It is a sensitive subject for you. Do not allow it and know that many will find this poem of yours close to heart as I just did. Love Magics02 Magnifico Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

you spoke like as a great mother would!

Magics02 i really appreciated this motherly comments. this poem for you all great mothers and women all over the world. its the love i enjoyed from my mother that made me write this." i love all mother just like i would my Mum. i will defend the thought i have in this poem as though it were my mum. its very close to my heart. much respect to you. chumfin

Tonya

16 years 2 months ago

:)

I cherish my mom too! Thank you for a lovely tribute. I'm sure your Mother is very proud of you Chumfin! It is hard to think of anything more precious then the love a child has for their mom or the love a mom has for their child. God Bless. Always, Tonya

chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

thank you!

Tonya, you are very welcome and thanks to you for the kind comments, you are greatly appreciated for reading. remain blessed chumfin

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Chumfin

As weirdelf says, you do write well, beautifully, in fact. I wish I'd had a mother such as the one you write of, but in fact and in history mine was a monster. Always, Cat

chumfin

16 years 2 months ago

thanks to ma'am

i appreciate you comments, i am happy you read it. what ever happened to you as a child am very sure you made an excellent mother to all you have shown love to .that is why this poem is also for you thank you again chumfin