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Mar 21, 2010
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The pattern of sound
What is the cymatic sound patternOf my sweet sons laughterThe sound of his spirals of joyContagious with their delicate innocenceOf life’s simplicities.Our children are the patternWoven from our life on this earthThe snail trail of our journeyFrom birth to deathDo we find our way backFollowing the traces ofTranslucent slimeTo begin againA new journeyOr sing the songsOf our forefathersWho knew the patterns of the starsThe battlesThe warsAll timeless history past
— seabhac, Mar 21, 2010
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DawningDaytripper
16 years 2 months ago
Yes sound and speech, an
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Troy
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Liz
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Great suggestion
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Vibrations. In the
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Anna
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Liz
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Hi there Lyz
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Just a lovely one here Seab
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Mona
ziggy
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hi
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Ziggy