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loved
loved
Mar 20, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Stages Of Love



Stages Of  Love

 During different stages of life

 

 

 

 

Love has different meanings

 

For different people…

 

 

Moms love ...sis love ...bros love.... siblings love ….

 

 

Then the lust series starts to no end...

 

 

 

Well finally comes,
End of love......

 

 

 

Wait for me,

my poem kind  of love

 

 

 

And finally,

 

Finally,

Finally


*Where has love gone?

*This was my finest poem on love series.

   
— loved, Mar 20, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

You’re so right Loved.

You're so right Loved. There are so many different kinds, stages, of love. I don't have many things in my life that I love, but what I do have, I hold on to. My greatest love is, wait for it...my pet rat Zak. I love him dearly and unconditionally. Many people cringe at the very thought of a rat, but trust me Loved, he's just as beautiful and intellegent and lovable like any other, human, cat, dog, you name it. So yes, you are correct in what you say in your poem. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

very kind

we all love pets even i love dogs and lost one recently i had so many dogs in my life . rats is strange perhaps u r born in 1960 or 1972 surely 1984 will make you appear too young do let me know if its ok loved
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

I was born in 1957. And

I was born in 1957. And you're right about the 1960's. I used to live near a disused railway that was over run by rats and I wasn't afraid of them. We spotted Loved. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

pets

if u were born in the middle of the night ur keeping pets is alright and otherwise if you love pets is because a lover of living things are you thta's my bet loved
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

thanks and how do u say namestey r u an indian kind person too loved
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

namaste

ur namaste say it aaste [silently /softly] salaam would do good morning too loved
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

love stages

u understand love well in all its million facets u urself are loved one ur a lovely mom seeing your son that i can now bet loved sorry for the delay there is no system that we can know who has commented and when only msgs can be seen or is there a system i am unaware of pl do advise.
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

and finally

"where has love gone?" is how I would write that last line! Nice to have your posts recently Loved! Keep up the good work! Boni
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

where has love gone

how do i thank u and also incorporate the suggestion . perhaps i shall have to go to edit original, thanks again loved
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

stages of love

i couldn't follow ur suggestion please pardon my dumbness can i have it more explicitly please once again
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

love is yes

thanks mona Just a Thought I always really thought That summer ends… And Winter commences… Once the love affair Is legalised… And The honey moon is over loved