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Fromelles






We’ve lain lost for near a century. No-one knew where we were here

in a stranger’s land away from those whose memories held us dear.

We were diggers out for adventure, some too young to understand.

We fought for King and country out here in Fromelles, France.

It was supposed to be a diversion for the main action at the Somme.

The ‘Sugarloaf’ the target, but orders went all wrong.

The Germans on the hilltop could see for miles around.

And General Haking pushed us on when we no longer needed the ground.

On that fateful day in nineteen sixteen we were ordered the guns to charge

on the nineteenth day of July we faced machine gun barrage.

 

In “the worst twenty-four hours of Australia’s history,” the Fifth Division went over the top.

Some made it to the trenches, but full of rain they caused us to stop.

 “The air was thick with bullets in a criss-crossed lattice of death,”

was how Jimmy Downing described it – one of the few who survived the test.

Brigades Eight and Fourteen were there, and the Fifteenth led by ‘Pompey’ Elliott

who had predicted a ‘bloody holocaust’ and attempted to prevent it.

The Fifteenth Brigade was sorely let down, outflanked in no man’s land

when the British Sixty-first forgot to tell them of a change in plan.

Half of the Fifty-eighth Battalion was isolated and dismayed.

Left open to German bunkers they were caught in the enfilade.

 

Five thousand five hundred and seventy-three hurt in that bloodbath lay.

One thousand nine hundred and seventeen dead under Major General M’Cay.

Tears streaming down his face Pompey watched while his men died.

The ground resembled ‘a thousand butcher shops.’ Years later he committed suicide.

A truce to collect the wounded and dead poorly handled and misunderstood

left the casualties  dying on the battlefield crying out for Mother and God.

No comrades left to bury us, we were intertwined in mass graves

by the enemy who cut us down here on that fateful day.

No poppies grew above us, no cross showed where we lay.

Two hundred and fifty souls from the Battle of Fleurbaix.

 

Found in the year two thousand and eight, only seventy-five identified,

some by a science we never knew - DNA by descendants supplied.

A few of us were recognised by items with us unearthed,

a curled up hair in a locket, a ticket home to Perth.

We’re been re-buried in single plots at a place made especially for

the fallen who did not go home, with headstones for us all.

And those who can’t be named will lay at Pheasant Wood

below a stone simply engraved “Known unto God.”

I’ve waited for nearly a hundred years bushwhacked in foreign loam.

But now I’m free at last, and now I’m going Home.

 

 

— judyanne, Mar 20, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Critiques

weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

Fucking superb writing, Judyanne

you could so easily have tipped into sentimentality or vicarious bloddletting, yet the result is so powerful I had to pause, go away, think and regain some mesure of composure before responding. I am an Aussie after all, it would not do to go all teary on you. So if there are any spelling errors blame my keyboard. Look up the work of Fleur http://www.neopoet.com/fm1962 she writes and paints brilliantly on the subject of war. Cheers, Jess, As Salman Rushdie said, (and it is on the back of the Neopoet tshirts) “A poet’s work; to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world and stop it going to sleep”
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

thanks jess

so glad you liked it. it's a subject close to our hearts i think. i looked up fleur as you suggested, will follow her writes for sure. cheers judy
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Judy

Something I have always baulked at writing because of exactly what Jess said ... the possiblity of venturing into the senitmental side of me ... War should be spoken about as truth as someone with many Army, Navy, Airforce in my family I have always wanted to write of it ... but as I said want to do them justice ... one day I may attempt it well written ... Fromelles holds a heart from my extended family and this write touched me very deeply love your work keep it up Aussie aussie aussie OI OI OI ~!~! lest we forget Love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

This is a good well informed

This is a good well informed poem Judy. I found it just a tadd long though. And your first line I think may need an edit. {We’ve lain lost for near a century. No-one knew where we were here} Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

thanks rosina

the first line reads exzctly as i meant it i think these men were buried by the Germans on the battlefield, and the australian government knew they were, but still didn't know EXACTLY where therefore were unable to find them until (I think it was the Glasgow University) used modern technology to look therefore 'No-one knew WHERE we were here' is just what i meant to say. thanks for reading. judy
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Sorry Judy. I thought it

Sorry Judy. I thought it was meant to read: that `no one knew we were here`. It didn't seem to read properly to me. As you know I always appreciate you picking up on errors I make. Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

there was no error on your part rosina

i knew, and expected an edit from one of you, for i knew myself that the line looked wrong. i played with it and i could see no other way to say it, so it reads badly if you don't immediately know what the poem's about. (hard to do on the first line) thanks, i appreciate any help rosina, you know that. xxx love judy
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Judy.luv 2

Thanks Judy. luv 2 u Rosina xena465