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LOVING YOU

 

When I woke up this morning and I saw you lying there

with the sunlight through the curtains shining in your hair.

I looked at you lovingly, while you lay asleep

and leaned over to kiss you, gently on your cheek.

 

We sat together at the breakfast table, with talk of the day ahead

as always you had something to say, to help me clear my head.

The phone rang, one of the children, needing you again

and you patiently talked and listened to her, taking away her pain.

 

When I came home in the evening, at the end of a busy day

you were there at the door to meet me, in your usual way.

I’d never seen you more beautiful, in the clothes you wear

and I held you close to kiss you, while my hand ran through your hair.

 

Now as I lay beside you, as you sleep, in the dark of the night

I think how you always bring to my life, so much love and light.

Without your love I would be, like a candle without a flame

and for the close ones, who share our love, it would be the same.

 

 

 

 

 

 

— Timbo, Mar 20, 2010

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Country/Region: GBR

Favorite Poets: Rather than poets I tend to be influenced by songwriters and have a love of lyrics.

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seabhac

seabhac

16 years 2 months ago

What a lucky woman Timbo

Any chance of cloning you? In long term relationships it is so easy to go stale because we forget to say we love one another, forget the why that brought us together or sometimes we simply grow away. it is very settling and reassuring to read your beautiful intimacies to your lovely wife, give her a hug from me. Seabhac
Tim

Tim

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

thank you, but it's me that's the lucky one I reckon. Tim
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Tim

this ones just wonderful I agree with Liz your wifes a lucky woman give her two hugs, she deserves them and I sigh again lol love and hugs Jayne-Chloe
Tim

Tim

16 years 2 months ago

thank you

thank you, but again I have to say I'm the lucky one. Tim