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JOE'S ARK

 

JOE'S ARK

 

In amber stone you're caught,

in bone-like flesh,

the agony and the ecstasy,

the two staves in your heart,

the one to stab,

the other a staff,

the one the furies, devils,

the other the rod of Christ.

 

You choose your other life,

the one 

out in the deep dark sea

where now you've pitched your tent 

there in eternity, the floods 

in sandy fathomed bed 

where rocks your head, 

that shell, that poetic face,

through which we whisper grace,

a prayer, for a soul possessed,

floating in the limbo of no man's land;

where whale and octopus cling on,

to consciousness its weathered

measured trance-like vision spoiled,

by tempests wrecked and wracked,

oh cry out, I have not sinned in vain

my self within, 

my senses in denial

have lost their arts, 

my body drifts apart,

in tiny bits, the nibbled edges fishs eat,

disintegrating from this world,

in some unidentified bark

where first my breath took flight,

is it the Noah's Ark?



 


— Nordic cloud, Mar 20, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Oh Ann, how you love our

Oh Ann, how you love our Longo! Bless you both. With great love, your sister, Anna Words must be used like stepping stones: lightly and with nimbleness, because if you step on them too heavily, you incur the danger of falling into the intellectual mire of logic and reason. - Balsekar
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Ann

I am speechless dear one (((hugs))) love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

(((hugs and kisses))))

lovely dedication and empathic write. your a loving and gifted lady love to you from me annanya judyanne xxx
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pamela

16 years 2 months ago

choices

dear A., This is beautiful. You do such lovely work. P.
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Mariposa

16 years 2 months ago

Wow!

This is awesome. Very emotional read. I found myself wanting to reread certain parts over and over again, to savor them. What depth! xoxo Jhena
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Queen

All said. You with a heart, to cherish each and every word that spills from it. A wonderful and emotional poem, I have enjoyed. Hurry back. XX