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LADY OF THE LIGHT
Lady of the light
You were always the faithful one
with a saviour in your heart
you had seen the light of the Lord
from the very start.
even in your darkest days
and the autumn of your life
you never lost faith in the Lord
lady of the light.
Now you have left this life
and in us a memory
but we all think of you
and how you used to be
you had been the special one
when you lived your life
with a special kind of love
lady of the light.
And when I look back on life
I often think of you
looking out your window
the way you used to do
watching children go off to school
in the morning light
smiling to the world outside
lady of the light.
Now you are there in Heaven
and back again once more
with those who you had loved
who had to go before
always forever the faithful one
when you lived your life
for you had seen the light of the Lord
lady of the light.
Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
Religious poems suck
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
Well Jess, I’m not really
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
mybad. Poems are always open to interprtation.
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
This is a gentle poem
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Mona for your
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
I sensed that also in your poem