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sunscreen
sunscreen
Mar 18, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Whisper from my lips

Flowing freely from mind
Murmurs of confusion
Cunningly smooth words

Unique phrases mesmerize
Lips curve into smiles
Hands reach out, uniting

Mind emotion undoubtedly
Reach into the abyss
Touch unknown sensations

Release your hearts plan
A key used to unlock
Clarity in uncertainty

Speak the truth
Let it fill you
Knowledge given freely

A whisper from me to you.



— sunscreen, Mar 18, 2010

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raskin

16 years 2 months ago

This is pretty good. I

This is pretty good. I especially like your last line. raskin
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you :)

I appreciate the feedback, I've not heard of you, so now I will check you out.
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Once again a lovely piece of

Once again a lovely piece of writing Alex. Happy and full of the joys of life, something we can all do with and you gave that to us. Rosina xena465
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks :)

Haven't been around lately, so I'll have to take a gander at your new writes, and ninjas a little stinker now that shes in heat.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Alex

I love your end lines but the middle didnt hold the strength that your beginning and end did ... still a lovely write love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x