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Mar 18, 2010
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'Thirty pieces of silver'
Betrayal was a game I never wanted, to play but as anyone can tell youI can learn 'long the way as the weapon's are drawn don't be living a dream and think its unnoticedyour piss has no stream for the multitude of people you have tricked before I am now the wrathwaiting silent at your door please don't be worried I give back whats received when you find that's nothingjust remember I believed in the middle of the darkness I stayed all the night returning you to comforttill you forgot all your fright now that the truth is out I find I'm quite calm but the message in my eyesis making some alarmed in the silence of my mind in the halls of my heart emotions have all fledadmiration's fell apart but I wait in a minute as your wising up I'm ready, armed and ableas daylight reveals sunup as years have traveled one thing eats my craw its injustice to the weakI guess its my flaw but I really couldn't give a fat rats arse in hell bring your best to bearits time to ring the bell I know that you lurk as a shadow of life come and play betrayal my words are my knife
— Seren, Mar 18, 2010
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CyberSpace
16 years 2 months ago
rotflmfao @ your piss has no
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
LOL glad you liked that line
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Double hubby’s rotflmfao,
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
And I love my Ma lol that
Geezer
16 years 2 months ago
Must be the season!
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Sir Gee
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
loved the piss having no steam line
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judd
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Jayne-Chloe
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Cat
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
p.s.
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Cat
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
You were right
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Seabhac
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
If the treasure I seek is
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Do you mean John Everett
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
You go get them Jayne.
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Rosina
Geezer
16 years 2 months ago
Stumbles...
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Gee
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
I had only heard the tiny rats arse!!
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Ann
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Annie
club special
16 years 2 months ago
I like this poems flowing
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Brian
sunscreen
16 years 2 months ago
:) Good job, I’ve been
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Alex
arja
16 years 2 months ago
..that is a very strong
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Alone
arja
16 years 2 months ago
LOL…well keep ‘em
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Alone
arja
16 years 2 months ago
..i believe each person does
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Arja
arja
16 years 2 months ago
LOL! ;)hugs back at you -arja
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
A great Bitch
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Yep alls well now I dont