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Mar 18, 2010
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Enjoy your crackers
Dry and brittleThe quincentennial British biscuitOf aged crumbling togethernessWhen system overloadAllows no spice in lifeNo oriental influences“Have another cracker dear” Face the shuffled daysAnd the frigid nights ofTormented what could have beenFor the sake of another cracker But you are togetherNeutral territoryFor the boys to sometimes visitThey have stopped slipping youColourful treatsLeaving you to your feast of crackers. The cycle goes onThey fear deathBecause they see living death in your lifeThey see it in your plate of crackers.
— seabhac, Mar 18, 2010
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seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
What there was cheese too?
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Seabhac
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Jayne
raskin
16 years 2 months ago
Complexity, love the use of
seabhac
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks Raskin