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Mar 17, 2010
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Your Face
Your face
Your face reminds me
Of the lovely face
We lost years ago
In heaven
The loved one now resides
Hope you all know.
The end was sad
Her spouse was a cheat
Gradually love turned
To a forbidden treat
He had had her
Had her,
All of her
Most of it.
Then ate her up
Slowly
But
Surely
Bit by bit
Bit by bit
Bit by bit.
— loved, Mar 17, 2010
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kowque
16 years 2 months ago
the last four lines are
loved
16 years 2 months ago
THANKS
franny50
16 years 2 months ago
Very heartfelt!
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
im loving your work
loved
16 years 1 month ago
THANK YOU