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Your Face

Your face


Your face reminds me

Of the lovely  face


We lost years ago


In heaven

The loved one now resides


Hope you  all know.

 

The end was sad

Her spouse was a cheat

Gradually love turned

To a forbidden treat


He had  had her

Had her,

All of her

Most of it.
 


Then ate her up
Slowly
But 
Surely 


Bit by bit


Bit by bit


Bit by bit.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, Mar 17, 2010

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loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

THANKS

U MUST BE REALLY brilliant to value brilliance thanks once again LOVED
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

thanks u all r modern generation and so very sweet loved
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

im loving your work

great poetry,i know someone who died because her boyfriend found a lover, was a true waste of life Your a little dark horse! fabulous stuff shirley harrison
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

THANK YOU

I TRY to help avoid divorces becoz the new devil perhaps could be worse but women don't know that as yet loved