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The True Story of Lillian Rosendale
Lillian Rosendale
owned six bankbooks
bequeathed her by her father.
They totalled forty-four thousand pounds.
She looked at her books every day
running loving fingers over the figures.
Never spending a penny,
she dressed in rags and ate scraps
left over from others’ plates .
A stranger’s path fate had her cross.
He entered the same cafe Lily was meandering
looking for scraps, other’s leavings.
Ordering two rolls he went to a table,
drew some white powder from his pocket
covered the rolls with it,
then heartily ate one.
Ignoring the other he left.
Lillian immediately moved to his place,
ate the second
while holding her bankbooks tight.
Suddenly someone called
a man was dead.
It was the stranger who’s bread
Lillian was eating.
A sad and lost soul, the powder was toxin
he’d bought with suicidal intent.
Lily too had been poisoned,
and dropped dead on the floor of the cafe.
The bankbooks she had been lovingly caressing
lay on the floor beside her.
He died outside,
She died in.
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
OMG. What a teaching tale
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks anna
mand
16 years 2 months ago
make the most of life -
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi Mand
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
So precious this life in the NOW.
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
love to you annanya
Clem
16 years 2 months ago
content and style
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
nice to meet you CLeM
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi kal
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Judd
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
i live for the day too JC
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
A really funny story
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks rosina
Kailashana
15 years 12 months ago
Right about now, I’d love
judyanne
15 years 12 months ago
ditto
Candlewitch
15 years 12 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
15 years 12 months ago
thanks cat