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Mar 10, 2010
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EAU DE VIE
Looking at you in the
restaurant I'm reminded that
I like to
drink you,
First the eyes-dancing amber
and flashes of tiger.
Then the lips,
full and
inviting.
Just signals to the start
of the sport to come.
The fork of food is used like
Poseidon's tool-thrusting into
the depths of pleasure
beyond beyond
imagination.
My tongue on your fork
of food-moistens and caresses.
I leave the table.
Returning, I stroke your hand
like a snail leaving trails.
You smile and hold your hand
to
smell mine.
My gift is like the smell
of earth-primeval and truthful.
Your pleasure is
breached.
Your wise smile is a countdown
to the cut & thrust of our sport.
Later, in your arms, I'm
awash
with the pool of
pleasure around me.
I swim in you. on you
under you and drink your
Eau de vie...
Ellie LaCrosse
restaurant I'm reminded that
I like to
drink you,
First the eyes-dancing amber
and flashes of tiger.
Then the lips,
full and
inviting.
Just signals to the start
of the sport to come.
The fork of food is used like
Poseidon's tool-thrusting into
the depths of pleasure
beyond beyond
imagination.
My tongue on your fork
of food-moistens and caresses.
I leave the table.
Returning, I stroke your hand
like a snail leaving trails.
You smile and hold your hand
to
smell mine.
My gift is like the smell
of earth-primeval and truthful.
Your pleasure is
breached.
Your wise smile is a countdown
to the cut & thrust of our sport.
Later, in your arms, I'm
awash
with the pool of
pleasure around me.
I swim in you. on you
under you and drink your
Eau de vie...
Ellie LaCrosse
Comments
Lonnie
16 years 2 months ago
A Passionately Profound Poem!
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Blush
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Yummy!The top ten sex & food
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
You bad, bad girl!
hillrider
16 years 2 months ago
This was the best
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
ha ha ha
kaligantsaros
16 years 2 months ago
The smoke of peat and the glow of amber barley..
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Whisky...
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Ellie
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
tracked down, huh?...
Atticus
16 years 2 months ago
First of all, I love the
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
Of all the critiques...