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flowering moonbeams ~ for Annamom

all the beauty and wonder a vision of dreams  a natural spectacular   slipped through a seam    making smiles for miles  you lit up our days as your voice rang outsouls lost were saved your anger is deep at the harshness of life  I've seen crying for days   for a strangers plight    a heart on a platter  is what you give out at injustice your ragecant be sold for a shout I have cried with laughter at the oddest times  on a rainy night   at the witching line    I have watched you create  a scripture of hours I watch as your smileadorned the wildflowers I could cry for the pain that's burning my heart  I could rage at the night   while I rip it apart     But I push that aside  for the love that I feel couldn't be strongeror anymore real  your a flower on my moon a star in my night sky  I sit here and wonder   will I let my heart cry     the tribute you've given   I send back to you for the butterfly daysand the wildflowers too  at the ebb of the tide as light hits the moon  flowers are dancing   as spring threads your loom    all the beauty and wonder  of a walking dream the moonbeams are quietas she slips through a stream Namaste  for Annamom 
— Seren, Mar 17, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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C

CyberSpace

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful

Beautiful
mand

mand

16 years 2 months ago

A tribute to a wonderful

A tribute to a wonderful person by the sounds of it. Lovely, quiet, strong, passionate, loyal, caring and more. Lovely flow and I love your title and the way you have laid it out. An altogether lovely poem. Love Mand
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Mand

I would say you know Kailashana shes an inspiration to so many people here her writing is simply amazing thanks for your kind comment I do appreciate it this one is from the heart love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Lovely tribute to such a dearly loved person

Ann of Norway These two lines I specially liked dear Jayne, and yes she is all to all, an omnipotent, potently beautiful person, one full of love overflowing, and all respond in the wave of her wand, like aura-beams lighting our hearts up, we are so grateful that she exists and that we have had the opportunity of meeting someone like her. Yes in these lines the flowers of the world are celebrating her too; and that loom, on which she weaves such fabric ,that the whole world of light is absorbed into its diaphanous beauty and it glows and glitters challenging the stars, the moon and all the planets. " flowers are dancing as spring threads your loom" Yes we all love this person called Anna Kailashana, as she dances over the village greens of our hearts and gathers us up in the folds of her dress to be blessed and bathed in all the colours of the rainbow. Love to you Jayne for your poem and to Anna as we sing it to her in our hearts. Ann.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Ann

Shes an inspiration thats going to be missed when she goes ... (((hugs))) Love you dear lady will email you tonight love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Miles of smiles and sighs of

Miles of smiles and sighs of I's. The best thing is yesterday you rhymed in a rant and today it's taken on a whole new slant. Your momanna smiles with seren-dipity, her seren is serene, knowing there is no pity in her serendipity. All my love, Ma "To love another person is to see the face of God." Les Miserables
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

how can I pity a flower on

how can I pity a flower on the moon or a star in my night but know I will miss you with all of my might love you Ma happy early mothers day I had already written this one but I rewrote it for you last night after I saw your message ((((hugs)))) love you big time Jayne-Chloe x x x x
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 2 months ago

Stupendous...

Beautiful, magical, wonderful, lovely, brilliant, mesmerising, fantastic and just bloody great mate... :) xxxxx
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Fleur

the dancing dervish that whirls in the night thank you for your visit dear one (((hugss))) you have been missed by lil ol me I am so glad to see you around again love to you biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x x
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Fluer said it

Fluer said it all...Brilliant. I love the way you describe everything especially: You're a flower on my moon...love it Jayne. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Rosina

Kailashana is the flower on the moon isnt she a wonderful writer ? and an even better person love to you and thanks for your kind comment Jayne-Chloe x x x
CS

club special

16 years 2 months ago

Club Special

This poem is awesome. I especially like the last two stanzas, very very nice imagery the way it's written. Plus the care you took with the graphic element of the poem only adds to it and gives me ideas. Best regards, Brian
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Brian

Thank you so much this ones for someone whose like family to me shes a walking inspiration and one of the reasons I better myself as a person and a poet ... I am glad you have ideas lol thats the great gift of neopoet we all bounce off one another and make great music in words ;) love Jayne-Chloe
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dearest Judd

Anna isnt just my favourite poet shes my other mum shes been a rock for me all these months and never not been there for me I couldnt not write it there is so much more I can say about her, and I will in time shes a living inspiration seriously wonderful poet and person love and hugs Jayne x x x
L

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Awesome

A stunning write for Annamom. Love Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Need a laugh ?? I had brain

Need a laugh ?? I had brain fade thought that mothers day was there this weekend like the Brits lol wrote this and posted it well shes going to have to get another one cause this ones two months too early lmao ~! see blonde moments do happen teach me not to check love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
M

Mariposa

16 years 2 months ago

I love it!

I love the shape, I love the words, I love the rhythm, I love it all. Also, Namaste is something I like to say a lot! I have at last found a kindred spirit! Oh, Jayne-Chloe, it is always an other-worldy experience to read your poems! Hugs, Jhena
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Jhena

the person I wrote this for Anna (kailashana) was the one who started me saying Namaste so for me it was another way of honouring her ... thanks for your very kind comment ... I am always happy when someone gets pleasure from my words love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe