Lunegirl

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Prozac

Romeo romeo, where art thou fucking romeo?

I used to think the pain would kill
that i would slowly die
a piece of me would wither up
every time i cry

Your not hanging on my skirts
not breathing beer on my ear
telling me shit jokes
my mind was finally clear

one step forwards two steps back
i got literature diarrhea
got the equivalent of word clap
one little note an my calm all undone
a little tiny sorry wrapped an homespun

but the tears they don't come
cos i took a little pill
they prick behind the eyes
but that is all i feel
I'm feeling kinda numb
its really rather cool
no more licking windows
staring vacant in my own drool

you know what romeo
your words they don't mean shit
five long months to late
sorrys made of salt and grit
to rub in unclosed wounds
scratch cuts open wide
so where art thou now romeo
your sorrys smell of lied

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Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Vicki

Just brilliant. I've been there, so what can I say. I even laughed at myself while I read this piece. Thank you! Always, Cat

Lunegirl

16 years 2 months ago

That in turn made me

That in turn made me laugh... I was thinking poor neo poets being offered another rant from me :S but im glad it raised a laugh. I needed the one to xxx love vix Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

loved

16 years 2 months ago

REMEMBERING LOUISARMSTRONG

PLEASE DO COMMENT ON MINE TOO REMEMBERING LOUIS ARMSTRONG Be happy, why worry Sang Louis Armstrong So be it, Be happy why worry When things go wrong, Be happy be strong, All that’s gone wrong Will all be gone. What’s wrong? Be happy That’s all life‘s about, Why then we will never go wrong Be happy, Be strong Be strong Be strong LOVED

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

Hehehehe. I wrote a Romeo

Hehehehe. I wrote a Romeo poem in 1972 ~~ the rant continued... and I ended it with Romeo Romeo wherefore art thou Romeo? Did you bring the Saturday Night Special (A small handgun). Well ok, it wasn't funny then. ;-) Hugs, Anna I'll come back for more.. but the end might be: your sorrys smelled of I lied. (you forgot to drink the potion) "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." ~ Paul Valery

Lunegirl

16 years 2 months ago

Having had no contact since

Having had no contact since before the birth, My little ones father wrote three days ago. ''So sorry its over due, i really want to see her now. bla bla bla'' I have a scary history of chooseing the wrong sort. Romeo romeo where art thou romeo. In the public hopuse supping cool beer and wenching me thinks. and no it sounds as though it wasnt funny then! love miss vixy x Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

loved

16 years 2 months ago

REMEMBERING LOUIS ARMSTRONG

HOWZ THIS ONE PLEASE DO COMMENT THANKS LOVED Be happy, why worry Sang Louis Armstrong So be it, Be happy why worry When things go wrong, Be happy be strong, All that’s gone wrong Will all be gone. What’s wrong? Be happy That’s all life‘s about, Why then we will never go wrong Be happy, Be strong Be strong Be strong

kaligantsaros

16 years 2 months ago

The play just cries out ..

For just this sort of treatment, full of bile and anger and you certainly did that well. There is a cruel irony in all of this of course and the Juliet is clearly livid at her "lover" gone wrong. I haven't starred it because this write can really go on to become a superb write but only if the emotions, incidents etc are pointed up and sharpened. The anger is palpable and maybe a few days away will allow you to return more objective and refreshed to shape it. Kal

Lunegirl

16 years 2 months ago

I think Kal there is a fine

I think Kal there is a fine line between poetry and writting therapy when using verse emotionally for myself. This reeks of the latter :) Some of my best is ''spewed out'' as is some of my worst. Thanks for your feedback, I will revisit in a few days when im in a different perpective. I think if i look back over the poetry/ writting ive done about relationships its important for the reader to know that first there was the abusive relationship that left me vulnerable to fall for the guy that walked when i was pregnant. Thankfully, I had time to heal and reflect on mind sets that led to bed decisions in choosing wrong relationships. Being a mother again later in life has also been beautiful and healing. Although i welcome my little ones father into her life if he so chooses, i am a little mad at him for his actions and have little trust. rather than tell him that though, i thought a healthy dose of writting else where would reflect things :) Sorry for the essey, I am candid if anything vix Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Wow I can share the same story along these lines

Good Morning Madam How this write was amazing to me and how I can relate to it. You know I can start writing along these very same lines as too of my life and my son's father but boy it would be something else, a whole nother book in it's making for sure. As we age we see and feel things that we once went through and now yes we can write of it in a very different light. I could go on and probably most honestly will start to do just that to release all that bent up emotion I have had at one time for the things my sons father did and what he does not do for his own biological son. It is sad but very much true and we only know as Mother's what we have endured all the years of that missing parent and the love that they missed out on may at a time in their life come a little too late. Unfortunatly that is truth. Madame you may have opened up a whole new can of worms to my writing as may be fit to just go and do it. Actually I have some in my journal I may just have to release here before long THE ABSENT PARENT and all that it does to a loving child. Sorry this comment so long but now you got me a rolling in the thunder. Love to you and maybe we can call it the rant of a lifetime Much love and know just of what you speak, and oh how lowly the beer can still swings in his life. Cause of it all. xoxoxoxoxo MagicsMona

Lunegirl

16 years 1 month ago

Hey Monathanks for your

Hey Mona thanks for your feedback. It is always welcome and it is good to share experiences. I will look out for your new work! |I am going to come back to this piece and edit it, to get the best out of it poetically. Just been so busy of late! Feel free to say whatever you wish, small or big lol. emotion is the founding aspect of our greatest work? love back to you as well, and for your strengths. vix xx Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

loved

16 years 2 months ago

LOVELY

THIS SITE PRINTS WORDS LIKE FUCK AND SHIT ALL FOUR LETTER WORDS MUST BE FOR MATURE FUCKING MINDS I SUPPOSE BUT LOVELY FUCKING POETRY MA'AM YOU DO COMPOSE WHERE DO THE ROMEOS CARRY PILLS ALL WOMEN HAVE TO LOO AFTER THEIR ILLS SO CONDOMISE THE WORLD OF ROMEOS ASK THEM TO FOOT LICK AND THEN YOU CAN GO OFF TO THE STICK OR WELL I SHANT USE FOUR LETTER WORDS MY MOUTH IS FOUL BUT STILL I KNOW U'LL LKE IT WELL THEN HOWZ IT

Lunegirl

16 years 2 months ago

Please feel free not read my

Please feel free not read my poetry that does offend, rhyming baddly sends me round the bend, on here i noticed a trend, a comment oppotunity my poem page does lend. words like fuck and shit, are really only words, to get so silly about it is really quite absurd. I have some clean poems though, if those you do prefer, now im off to read your poems, and on those ill comment sir :P Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Is this another rant in reply

I thought I would ask why?? Curious you know the one that writes of the same comment on everyones pages? Quite absurd to say the least. Madame please take the call. LOL Love Magics Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.

Lunegirl

16 years 1 month ago

Lol i dont mind at all, i

Lol i dont mind at all, i just thought id lighten the atmosphere with a light hearted naff rhyme. I believe in complete freedom of expression and think that posting on here opens the poet up to all sorts of feedback. not everyone will like my work which is what i expect :) I can grow from all sorts off feedback and if i was really offended i would pm the offender and discuss it with them or just ignore it. It takes alot to wind me up : ). Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

Hahahahahahahaha The poem

Hahahahahahahaha The poem is ironic that I read it today, as I just wrote a true romeo poem. and as the "Loved" comment. There really was no need to use all caps LIKE THIS. If you do not like words you see as fowl, then do not read the poem with it, and keep your comments to self. Vixxy is a brilliant poet, and her words are truth.

Lunegirl

16 years 1 month ago

Hey, thanks for your

Hey, thanks for your feedback!! I will read your poem to : ) thanks also for the thumbs up. Its fine though, everyone is entitled to their opions, its what makes us richer a? hope your weekend was great :) vix Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes

Ink Dragon

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Vicki,

I have been there too, so naturally your theme resonates with me. Laughed my bum off about your opening line :D fucking Romeo, eh? A couple of typos that should be corrected: l.1: Romeo(, R)omeo, where art thou fucking (R)omeo? - l.6: (You're) not hanging on my skirts - l.10: one step forwards(,) two steps back - ll.13&14: one little note (and) my calm all undone a little tiny sorry wrapped (and) homespun - l.30: your sorrys smell of (lies) not sure if it's sorrys or sorries, never tried to make a plural out of sorry before... Yours, ~Nina P.S. Ever read my poem "Haunted"? Very much about the same subject...

Lunegirl

16 years 1 month ago

Hey Nina,Thankyou for that

Hey Nina, Thankyou for that feedback, ill get onto that tomo. I will also read your poem Haunted. I am glad you saw the humour in the first bit, i do try to do that but dont always get it across properly! love vix : ) Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes