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crypticbard
crypticbard
Mar 17, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Your Name

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your name
still
another thousand
memories fill.

your voice
rises
clear above chimneys
forever shrill.

your form
cryptic silhouette
idylls of faceless clocks'
secrets spill.

your gait
saunters
deftness on pointe -
pleuritic thrill.




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— crypticbard, Mar 17, 2010

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

This was an interesting write

Hello there and I had to read this one twice as I pondered a minute or two between verse. I noticed the fouth line in each little verse did rhyme. Tell me what type of poem would you call this and I will be back to visit again Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

16 years 2 months ago

Hello

Thank you for visiting this poem and replying to it. It isn't a particular form, not that I know of anyway. If it should pick up we should name it something peculiar, don't you think? :-)