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The Artist

 The Artist

He told me he was a painter
I never gave it a thought
I pictured ladders and drop cloths
Gallons of paint being bought
Never ever did I envision
Canvas and palettes and brushes
Roses and oceans and fruit
Bushes that were so luscious

In awe, I sat there staring
Each canvas, one by one
One held a moon so soulful
Another captured the sun
He painted the mountains majestic  
The canyons and the plains
I don't know how he did it
But he even painted the rains

Each stroke was simply perfection
Each shade the perfect hue
Kneaded and blended in harmony
He even captured the dew
Oh no, he's not a painter
To say so would be absurd
Oh YES, the man's an artist
In every sense of the word.

— jetz, Mar 16, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Eph, Thanks, as always,

Hi Eph, Thanks, as always, for your creative response. It's always a pleasure to see a message from you. Thanks again, Sue
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 2 months ago

Wow, some amazing imagery in

Wow, some amazing imagery in here, reminds a lot of that Jewel song, 'Painters", same sort of thing but much different. This is well written, descriptive and beautiful. Nicely done. :) Peace and paint
jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi M.T. If you saw the

Hi M.T. If you saw the paintings, you would understand how easily I was inspired to write these words. I truly appreciate your read and reply. Sue
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

He may be an artist with his

He may be an artist with his paints, but you're sure an artist with your poetry. Brilliant and deseves recognigion. ********* Rosina xena465
jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Licia, You my friend

Hi Licia, You my friend are far too kind. You ever find yourself inspired to write something, and your fingers just take off as if they have a mind of their own? That was the case with this piece. His paintings are awesome...Wish there was a way to post one here. Thanks Licia, for your ever inspiring encouragement. Sue
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Hello Sue

The imagery is breathtaking. I am speechless. Always, Cat
jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Cat, Thank you so much

Hi Cat, Thank you so much for taking the time to respond to this poem. As you can see from previous responses I have left, this piece was a joy to write. I am glad you too, enjoyed it. Once again, thanks. Sue
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hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

if I gave stars

I'd give them all to you. You are an artist with words. I had the talent but not the drive to be a great artist. I could say the reason was I was a victem. But I blame me.Keep writting. huey
jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Huey, Anything that

Hi Huey, Anything that gets you to surface here at Neo is a blessing. Glad you could relate to this write. Care to share any of your work? Sue
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lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Grand

Thanks for delivering and sharing this wonderful poem. Love Lyz. XX
jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Lyz, for both the

Thanks Lyz, for both the read and for taking the time to respond. Much appreciated. Jetz
arja

arja

16 years 2 months ago

[ SIGH ]..an artist indeed..

[ SIGH ] ..an artist indeed.. }}}APPLAUSE{{{ ..i'm more than happy to have read this piece..not much to say..
jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Alone, Wow, such a nice

Hi Alone, Wow, such a nice reply. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this write. I thank you also for the add. Much appreciated. Sue