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ARE we NORMAL????



ARE WE NORMAL???

Lovely   writers we,

 

I have seen the world,

 

Walking

 

Air crafting

And

Motoring
lesser shipping

 

I have yet to fly to the moon

 

Only if some day

 

I have the opportunity

 

Ere I go away

 

A bit too soon...

 

I will also write

 

About  our loveliest  moon...

 

Your writings are graceful

I hope a friend

I’ll make one out of you

Very,very soon

 


We Are Normal

Are We Normal

Well said,

Even I am not normal

No human being actually is

Or for ever can be

What is normal any way?

Can some one
Really tell me?


You are free to score a full ten

If you can convince me....


— loved, Mar 16, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

This poem is good L

Ann of Norway I like its lilt and I like its content looking at it unbiased, I like this well done. A challenge to prove us sane?!! Respectfully Ann.
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

ma'am

five stars never pl give as i will feel there is nothing more and i am sure that's not ur reading my poems for. rgds loved
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

THANKS

THANKS UR KIND LOVED DOES THAT INDICATE UR SMILING OR AT ME?????//WHICH????????????
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 2 months ago

Loved

Nice to see you posted this one with it's gentle irony! Keep up the good work! Bonita j
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

kindness

i am very happy to be a reciepient of ur kindness rgds loved
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

correction

i before c but never after e so receiptient would cover the typo error rgds loved
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

aren't we u should know better than I RGDS