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Mar 16, 2010
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Then Came The Night
Then Came The Night
selling my soul to midnight
seeping into my hungering psyche
absorbed in the guile of moonlight
longing to take flight
in the mounting of the sky
the magnolia child in me
once a worshipper of rainy days
gives over to the surrounding ebony
I see the moonbeams touch my skin
and I am now a golden goddess
framed by whispering night
I dance the exotic
with asteroids and meteors
a shooting star I ride
past the milky Way's Delphinus
into another solar system
I see a star wink out
wondering where goes the light
of a once vibrant now dying star
— Candlewitch, Mar 16, 2010
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xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Brilliant Cat. I love where
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Rosina
greeneyes
16 years 2 months ago
Oh the wonderous night! Your
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Elizabeth
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
beautifully done CatLoved
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Jayne-Chloe
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
cat
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Ziggy
pamela
16 years 2 months ago
lovely
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you dear P. glad you
loved
16 years 2 months ago
You Give Life
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Loved
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Cat
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear raj
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Honestly Cat…more often
Bonitaj
15 years 11 months ago
Hello Cat!
Lunegirl
15 years 11 months ago
Brilliant read to come back
poewriter58
15 years 11 months ago
Cat