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Then Came The Night


Then Came The Night

selling my soul to midnight
seeping into my hungering psyche
absorbed in the guile of moonlight
longing to take flight
in the mounting of the sky
the magnolia child in me
once a worshipper of rainy days
gives over to the surrounding ebony
I see the moonbeams touch my skin
and I am now a golden goddess
framed by whispering night
I dance the exotic
with asteroids and meteors
a shooting star I ride
past the milky Way's Delphinus
into another solar system
I see a star wink out
wondering where goes the light
of a once vibrant now dying star
— Candlewitch, Mar 16, 2010

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Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Brilliant Cat. I love where

Brilliant Cat. I love where these images take me. I wish it was me travelling into the unknown...even a dead star is never dead. Rosina xena465
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ziggy

16 years 2 months ago

cat

hi cat v interesting exercise indeed , must give it a go nicely done ,,,,,,,,,zigy
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Ziggy

I can't wait to see what you come up with. Always, Cat
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pamela

16 years 2 months ago

lovely

Dear C., A lovely tribute to the night. Loved it. P.
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

You Give Life

You give life to the heavens And soul to things, Beyond mankind’s, goal For some day When we all show As we meet there You and I, We will then know We both were Neopoets’ That’s when our faces shall glow And The world will smile at us, From the earth down below Loved BY ONE AND ALL
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Loved

Thank you for the sentiment of your lovely comment! Always, Cat
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raj

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Cat

i loved the absractness of this write where you have made wonderfull choices of celestial bodies to emote an ethereal experience... warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear raj

Thank you. I always love to read what you have to say about my poems. May you have a peaceful day. Always, Cat
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raj

15 years 11 months ago

Honestly Cat…more often

Honestly Cat...more often than not..its the experience and the mood created after reading a piece of poetry which is responsible for the comment...i am just the medium transporting that experience... be well... warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)...
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

15 years 11 months ago

Hello Cat!

Such an ınterestıng uplıftıng wrıte! Partıcularly lıked the last lıne! Keep up the great work! Bonı
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Lunegirl

15 years 11 months ago

Brilliant read to come back

Brilliant read to come back to my friend!! beautiful poem indeed. vicki Optimism in adversity nutures positive outcomes
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poewriter58

15 years 11 months ago

Cat

WOW The wording of this poem is beyond description. I just told Kelsey in my comment to her blog that she is using exactly my method of teaching , and so is Mona. If you recall the text of my instructional book. This is brilliant. However one has to have the talent for finding words for this exercise to make it work and talented you are my dearest friend