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Mar 16, 2010
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Seasons
Flowers and leaves
falling
from the family tree.
As seasons come and go
more kin
drift away on soft winds,
free to float through timelessness
leaving new springs and summers
for those left behind
to wander
and wonder.
And as the tree
keeps spreading,
sprouting new growth every year,
joy mixes with sorrow,
greetings and partings entwine.
The branches gnarl
as lessons are learned
and buds bloom
while knowledge is gained,
‘til finally new foliage is old
and spring again fades to winter.
— judyanne, Mar 16, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Sigh.~A“To love another
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks anna
mand
16 years 2 months ago
A clever beautiful simile.
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
nice to see you mand
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
This leaf of your heart I shall press
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
love to you annanya
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you dear cat
jetz
16 years 2 months ago
Hi Judy, This is wonderful.
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks sue
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
I just sigh with my Malove
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
i sigh along wioth you both
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Yes even like the fallen
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
dear rosina
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hey eph !!!!