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Bernard Shaw
Mar 16, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Baby Eyes.

Baby Eyes.Large Baby eyes smiling joyfully at me,
Baby eyes as brown as can be.
Two deep pools most innocent and bright,
To me are symbols of sheer delight.
May I greet you every single day?
For you are sunshine on my way.
Other people see you smile so sweet,
All are happier when you they meet.
Eyes are the windows to the soul,
No difficulties for you reaching your goal.
So sweet baby go on life's way,
Those Baby eyes have much to say.

© Bernard Shaw

— Bernard Shaw, Mar 16, 2010

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themoonman

themoonman

16 years 2 months ago

Hi Bern...

I hope you are enjoying your time here at Neo... I've read a few of your poems, you most certainly have the need to write it down. I'm perplexed by your critiquing choices, because the mechanics of poetry are often the only thing to comment on, unless you only want to hear how good the theme is, which, I find your themes joyful. Like this one, it sends warm baby smiles, who doesn't love that! Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I have been reading and thinking about your poetry. kind regards Richard
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Richard.

Hello Richard, I am a sucker for most forms of poetry, I hesitate to critiscise other peoples work, I am no expert, I either like a poem and say so or I ignore it. I must say some of the poems I have read on the web have had no meaning or relation to my world. I like military poems, Love and real good funny poems, especially funny poems, There is not enough to laugh at or about in this world, Please bear with me with my best regards Bern.
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 2 months ago

Bern...

There are many different styles offered here, the diversity is growing daily... enjoy. Richard
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Judyanne.

Thak you Kind Lady, Yes I enjoy life as well as I can andmy poems usually show this thank you for commenting greetings from bern.
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Such a dear lovely poem

Such a dear lovely poem bern. The joys of those new eyes when they open and see life for the first time, we can only imagine and the imagination feels nice. Rosina xena465
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Bernard Shaw

16 years 2 months ago

Rosina.

Yes Rosina no one can resist the sweet innocent eyes of a child,Greetings from Bern