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Mar 15, 2010
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Do you see me? (I'm back)
What does time mean to me,
Or memories that are left behind.
They are the two points in my life
That separate what I knew then
and what I know now.
Have things changed since
My memories waned,
it has only been the seasons
That have traveled on winds
Of a passing rains.
The madness, of my youth
That brought the sweetness
Of a gentle embrace,
Tender lips and words I can’t
Forget.
YES! I am a product of my past,
Build on a mount of memories
That make me who I am,
and linger on through my
Eternity.
Forget you, I think not, for you are
Part of the tapestry that was woven
In my past. So when I look at it,
I see you,
— Eduardo Cruz, Mar 15, 2010
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panaella
16 years 2 months ago
life's rich tapestry...
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 2 months ago
texture
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Eddie
Eduardo Cruz
16 years 2 months ago
JAYNE!! nice to hear from you buddy.
Ink Dragon
16 years 2 months ago
Eddie!!!!!
prayersbyPatty
16 years 1 month ago
Hey
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Welcome back