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evie.haywood

Mar 15, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

What Friends are For

Let's just pass time
by thinking
of their beautiful
smiles.

Let's just count
the hours
since their last
texts.

Let's just smile
to ourselves
and think
about what they said.

Let's just listen
to one another's complaints
because we
are best of friends.

— evie.haywood, Mar 15, 2010

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yenti

16 years 2 months ago

Evie

A tidy modern day piece that portrayed what friends are for, now lets get down to writing a chunky piece that portrays some inner feelings and what you can see out there with those feelings, Spring is around the corner everything is being made new, Yours Ian.T

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16 years 2 months ago

Thanks Ian. Have you read

Thanks Ian. Have you read 'Behind My Smile'. If not that's on may page, I find quite a deep piece. Described as 'Brave' by one user. Tell me what you think. :) Evie

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

We all need friends and a

We all need friends and a good friend always listens. I like that you've covered this in you sweet poem. Rosina xena465

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16 years 2 months ago

Thank You Rosina. This is

Thank You Rosina. This is actually about a specific friend of mine, we are bascially mirroring each other at the moment. Lol. Evie

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jim

16 years 2 months ago

Great

Very nice an pleasent piece. lovely write. Jim