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An Absurd Bow in Light

light wind blue away the grey
that set too often the Korean sky 

I wear an Armani button up
per chic suit jacket and 
old pajama pants 

formal from the waist up
on the weekend when
I bend out my window for
a cigarette 

old Korean ladies

ooooo
        aaaaa

at the well dressed foreigner
in his saturday best
taking in the sun interlude

they bow

I bow 

my hand
covering drawstrings

they pass and take
the quarter beat of light

in a moment one
of us grasps
— Ladderwords, Mar 15, 2010

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Region, Country: Jeju, KOR

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

So much here to love, Josh.

So much here to love, Josh. I am a huge fan of yours. So glad you're back at the computer, here. ~A "To love another person is to see the face of God." Les Miserables
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

I like this. I thought it

I like this. I thought it was funny...`chic jacket and pajama bottoms looking out the window`. It reminded me of a mock news program that show a male news caster with a lovely suit jacket, shirt and tie, but his bottom half showed him wearing jeans, as they couldn't be seen by the viewers. Made me laugh this one J.A Rosina xena465
Ladderwords

Ladderwords

16 years 2 months ago

More than happy to make you

More than happy to make you laugh this Tuesday afternoon! Thank you for the kind words. Just to paint a bit more of a picture for you, my apartment is right over a walking path. So this scenario happens multiple times a day with either smokes, a cup of coffee, or even a beer.