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Mar 15, 2010
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An Absurd Bow in Light
light wind blue away the grey
that set too often the Korean sky
I wear an Armani button up
per chic suit jacket and
old pajama pants
formal from the waist up
on the weekend when
I bend out my window for
a cigarette
old Korean ladies
ooooo
aaaaa
at the well dressed foreigner
in his saturday best
taking in the sun interlude
they bow
I bow
my hand
covering drawstrings
they pass and take
the quarter beat of light
in a moment one
of us grasps
that set too often the Korean sky
I wear an Armani button up
per chic suit jacket and
old pajama pants
formal from the waist up
on the weekend when
I bend out my window for
a cigarette
old Korean ladies
ooooo
aaaaa
at the well dressed foreigner
in his saturday best
taking in the sun interlude
they bow
I bow
my hand
covering drawstrings
they pass and take
the quarter beat of light
in a moment one
of us grasps
— Ladderwords, Mar 15, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
So much here to love, Josh.
Ladderwords
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you for the kind
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I like this. I thought it
Ladderwords
16 years 2 months ago
More than happy to make you