And god saw that it was Good.

Brilliant write ... I love where you went with this one,I considered both those word choices, in my opinion I would stick with curiosity but thats just me wait for the final vote ... I am not always right i usually go with my gut and curiosity does it for me love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

Another delight, Whitney. Absolutely wonderful re-view of an old view. Thanks. ~A p.s. curiosity is the opportune word. "To love another person is to see the face of God." Les Miserables

Dear w., I really like this one. P.

three hours sleep and then dreams most vividly horrible I feel as though the mirror has broken me and through the illusion of grandiosity and manic occular delusion I see the very grains that I am created of and crumbling in the sun as a Castle does This poem is a feirce read as your poems do have such vivid candour curiousity is such a fond word of mine although the other is well placed Im fading the ghost of sunset gleaning remnant of the great calamity until then Im enjoying fine poems such as these Esker~

library is sat link run bare scripts no poste em stars there So here you go~

Ann of Norway Aw that line I love in this context, White tea damsel, it has so many allusions in it. So subtle, so subtly you express things- "the obscure curl of the lip forming a curse" powerful. The phenomenon would give it a more universal meaning and not hang our thoughts up in its tangible solidity of a mirror, it being present in the reflections caused by water etc. Again you stride out with you head held high. Love Ann.

I think this write borders on brilliance. Always, Cat

All i can say is the woman's got talent

your gift as with others here is beautiful may poetry race among the ruins Esker~

You have here attained the perefect confluence of esoterica and beauty. True poetry is obscure while telling simple truths. Well done. John