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Mar 15, 2010
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Bring To Me Springtime
I Wake to each morning
My eye's smile bright
to the beautiful Sun
Dew that glistens in light
with fresh early breaths
of sweet smelling air
My heart jumps in murmurs
bursting warm as it flares
to excitements of beauty
brought to my sight
just the smallest things
like a Robins first flight
A lover of springtime
it brings out in all
these passionate feeling
we've sheltered from fall
a start of new cycles
from plant life to Bees
these blossoms of color
burst from winters lost freeze
building are rivers
with the melting of snow
hearts fill with pleasure
in each face there's a glow
So bring to me spring time
in the start of each day
let these eyes capture beauty
started early in may
for life is held closely
and beauty holds me
in this grasp of attention
with each new sight I see
My eye's smile bright
to the beautiful Sun
Dew that glistens in light
with fresh early breaths
of sweet smelling air
My heart jumps in murmurs
bursting warm as it flares
to excitements of beauty
brought to my sight
just the smallest things
like a Robins first flight
A lover of springtime
it brings out in all
these passionate feeling
we've sheltered from fall
a start of new cycles
from plant life to Bees
these blossoms of color
burst from winters lost freeze
building are rivers
with the melting of snow
hearts fill with pleasure
in each face there's a glow
So bring to me spring time
in the start of each day
let these eyes capture beauty
started early in may
for life is held closely
and beauty holds me
in this grasp of attention
with each new sight I see
— mantiscepter, Mar 15, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear John
mantiscepter
16 years 2 months ago
Your Autumn: Is my spring
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
You must be a Robin,
mantiscepter
16 years 2 months ago
almost maybe !!?
jetz
16 years 2 months ago
Very nicely done. It has
mantiscepter
16 years 2 months ago
a newness:
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
AARRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mantiscepter
16 years 2 months ago
Warm And Lovely
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
GOOD
mantiscepter
16 years 2 months ago
spring
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
You funny bunny