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Esker
Esker
Mar 14, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

INVISIBLE SKAR



comes end of light
begin of dark

the edge hour
losing
the draft shifting

dream slip vacination
the fascination
the slow

effervescent show
the spirit land
of no ones

placement

here are the impact
scenes
ragged lines
raised
like echoes for locations

your soul plays them
beneath liquid stars
the multitudinal
longing

— Esker, Mar 14, 2010

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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whitetea

whitetea

16 years 2 months ago

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Damn good writing here, cuttingly and honest.
Esker

Esker

16 years 2 months ago

damn thank you

Think of the cutter as in ship and the Cutty Sark it will be rebuilt I guess never drank the spirits though I am glad that you have found the appreciation of the words I put down in my block of time I think I mentioned that I do appreciate you poetry also I guess that is all for today Im mid mission at the moment on a beautiful afternoon Esker~
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pleiades

16 years 2 months ago

beautiful…eloquent…moving

beautiful...eloquent...moving 'comes end of light begin of dark' such simple, simple words...yet from your pen, they become so poetic i savoured this poem as if a fine wine... took my time let the words roll over my tongue tasted their full body exquisite ending a big sigh from me, p.