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IS IT A LOVE POEM OR TIS IT LOVE

 

Just what is a love poem, or love for that matter
Is it a feeling of euphoria lasting a short time
Or simply two hearts beating it’s one love rhyme
Is it trueloves, oneness, wholeness, a feeling shared 

What could it have been, or what truly is it
Two minds thinking alike, two hearts beating
At the same moment, in ecstasy or infatuation
We think of love on many different levels
When it comes to a man and a woman perhaps
Does it get lost in oblivion or stay true to one’s heart 

Is it in the knowing that one cared to share
Their true self completely shared with each other
Or is it fake, only temporary, came to soon to depart
Could it be a truth, a happiness to never fall apart 

Just what constitutes a love poem for all to read
Is it the thoughts of others, or feelings of a need
You will only know how far your heart can go
A true love will stay around through thick and thin
Never reminding you of a lost love, a thought you were in 

Can we become one, and forever, will it be done
Or do we abuse to use a love for a while
Is there an end to all those old empty smiles
For when have we dashed our foot against a stone 

Just what is a love poem
To me it is just that
To have and to hold
Forever two hearts to last
For love will come knocking
When you least expect it shall
You’ll know in your heart
Of the feeling’s all too well 

Hold on to your man
Hold on to your woman
A true love may be too hard to find
In looking too hard,naught you find the right kind
It may be right in front of you soon someday
For the love birds will be chirping along your way
True love may not be something, of your long ago past
For true love’s meaning is forever to last.


MMS 3.14.10

— magics02, Mar 14, 2010

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jim

16 years 2 months ago

Great

This is a great poem.A very enjoyable read. I think that love can be all or any of those things. Keep up the good work. Jim
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Jim

I appreciate that one and I don't know if we ever met but we have met now since you have graced my page with your lovely comment. Thank you and I am glad you liked it. I kind of pondered with it a little bit here and there and did not know if it was a poem or not but put it out there anyhow. And the stars bring a smile to my face.:) Will visit your pages also Jim Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Love the song, love your comment

Thank you my love that shines from above his name is crud and very much loved for Jim is in and love is no sin The splendour of hearts for never to depart and as the song goes along came a rose the dance of a night when along came Mr. Right That one special for you my friend. How do you make a heart on the keyboard to enter in here, and since I can not just close your eyes and you will see one specially drawn for you. Love and Hugs to Mr. Crud xxoxoxoxoxoxoxo sweet nothings in the ear..that is what I used to hear..lol. will check out your site really soon friend. Until then keep a writing that song. Love song that is:) Love, Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Mona

Did an edit on your format will come back later and star you up just copy paste the same as last time and it will tidy it up for you Just what is a love poem, or love for that matter Is it a feeling of euphoria lasting a short time Or simply two hearts beating it’s one love rhyme Is it trueloves, oneness, wholeness, a feeling shared What could it have been, or what truly it is Two minds thinking alike, two hearts beating At the same moment, in ecstasy or infatuation We think of love on many different levels When it comes to a man and a woman perhaps May it get lost in oblivion or stay true to one’s heart Is it in the knowing that one cared to share Their true self completely shared with each other Or is it fake, only temporary, came to soon to depart Could it be a truth, a happiness to never fall apart Just what constitutes a love poem for all to read Is it the thoughts of others, or feelings of a need You will only know how far your heart can go A true love will stay around through thick and thin Never reminding you of a lost love, a thought you were in Can we become one, and forever, will it be done Or do we abuse to use a love for a while Is there an end to all those old empty smiles For when have we dashed our foot against a stone Just what is a love poem To me it is just that To have and to hold Forever two hearts to last For love will come knocking When you least expect it shall You’ll know in your heart Of the feeling’s all too well Hold on to your man Hold on to your woman A true love may be too hard to find In looking too hard,naught you find the right kind It may be right in front of you soon someday For the love birds will be chirping along your way True love may not be something, of your long ago past For true love’s meaning is forever to last. love JayCee x x P.S the LAST's that were capitolized dont need to be let you words say it without yelling it
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you very much reads much better

Thank you and yes I probably needed to utilize the Last as in italics perhaps to make it stick out more as that was me intended message also, A good point and I shall remember to do that next time. Thanks for fixing it up for me. I need to work on the format with my open office status since I do not have notepad on this computer or word perfect. Let me see if I can past the line I need the help with when you submit the poem. I will be write back. lol xoxoxo Mona
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Mona when you paste from

Mona when you paste from here to Neo it creates extra spaces between the stanzas,if you want to reduce that just click your curser on the beginning of each stanza and backspace till you get the right distance between each stanza looks much tider now hun love Jaycee
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I did it and it looks much better

Thank you thank you and it does look better. I know something looks a miss and I guess it is not my usual 4 by 4 verses so I am a little off in a couple of them. A different thing today for me for sure, but liked it and appreciate your help Love Mona xoxoxox
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Mona

Love is many things, from that breathless feeling where you are tripping over the furniture, to a simple understanding smile. I think you have nailed it here. Always, Cat
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you Cat

And U are one great lady. May I ak what your cat's name is? Had a long day today and will back on tomorrow, thank you for always stopping by Glenda lady Love Mona xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
TS

The Seeker

16 years 2 months ago

A beautiful romantic

loves feeling are wonderful explain our emotions to ponder our ,Thank you for sharing Mona Love , Light and Happiness The Seeker...
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you so much My Jane

What a lovely compliment this lunch period to see. Yes I did not know if this poem was going to go anyway good or bad, I just write as I feel and see things. I appreciate what you said and always the pretty stars Love Mona xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.