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IS IT A LOVE POEM OR TIS IT LOVE
Just what is a love poem, or love for that matter
Is it a feeling of euphoria lasting a short time
Or simply two hearts beating it’s one love rhyme
Is it trueloves, oneness, wholeness, a feeling shared
What could it have been, or what truly is it
Two minds thinking alike, two hearts beating
At the same moment, in ecstasy or infatuation
We think of love on many different levels
When it comes to a man and a woman perhaps
Does it get lost in oblivion or stay true to one’s heart
Is it in the knowing that one cared to share
Their true self completely shared with each other
Or is it fake, only temporary, came to soon to depart
Could it be a truth, a happiness to never fall apart
Just what constitutes a love poem for all to read
Is it the thoughts of others, or feelings of a need
You will only know how far your heart can go
A true love will stay around through thick and thin
Never reminding you of a lost love, a thought you were in
Can we become one, and forever, will it be done
Or do we abuse to use a love for a while
Is there an end to all those old empty smiles
For when have we dashed our foot against a stone
Just what is a love poem
To me it is just that
To have and to hold
Forever two hearts to last
For love will come knocking
When you least expect it shall
You’ll know in your heart
Of the feeling’s all too well
Hold on to your man
Hold on to your woman
A true love may be too hard to find
In looking too hard,naught you find the right kind
It may be right in front of you soon someday
For the love birds will be chirping along your way
True love may not be something, of your long ago past
For true love’s meaning is forever to last.
MMS 3.14.10
Critiques
jim
16 years 2 months ago
Great
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Jim
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Love the song, love your comment
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you very much reads much better
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Mona when you paste from
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
I did it and it looks much better
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Cat
The Seeker
16 years 2 months ago
A beautiful romantic
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
you really are beautiful magic mona
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you so much My Jane