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Mar 14, 2010
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Let's undress (in the dark)
I have got a special gift for you
I've recorded some of my favourite tunes
"I know it's over" from 'The Queen is dead'
I also "feel the soil falling over my head" (sometimes)
Shall we listen to them drinking fizzy pop
Or something stronger, I'll see what I have got
I love the way
With your hair you play
So sweet
You look your best
In your lavender dress
Worn for me
I chose these songs so carefully for you
And included The Beatles 'Love me do'
Laid on your bed, my arm draped over your chest
Finally, against your lips mine are pressed (at last)
Our tongues entwined to 'still life' by Suede
Would you like some vodka with your lemonade
I love the way
We slip under your duvet
Feel my heart
Now I'll look my best
When I get undressed
BUT IN THE DARK!
I've recorded some of my favourite tunes
"I know it's over" from 'The Queen is dead'
I also "feel the soil falling over my head" (sometimes)
Shall we listen to them drinking fizzy pop
Or something stronger, I'll see what I have got
I love the way
With your hair you play
So sweet
You look your best
In your lavender dress
Worn for me
I chose these songs so carefully for you
And included The Beatles 'Love me do'
Laid on your bed, my arm draped over your chest
Finally, against your lips mine are pressed (at last)
Our tongues entwined to 'still life' by Suede
Would you like some vodka with your lemonade
I love the way
We slip under your duvet
Feel my heart
Now I'll look my best
When I get undressed
BUT IN THE DARK!
— Millage, Mar 14, 2010
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Critiques
J.Thomas
16 years 2 months ago
From one smiths fan to
Millage
16 years 2 months ago
Thank goodness....
whitetea
16 years 2 months ago
Sudden ending! Good music
Millage
16 years 2 months ago
Sincere thanks...
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Mile Man
Millage
16 years 2 months ago
Hi JC
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
OOHLAHLAH
Millage
16 years 2 months ago
Take it from me......
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Nice to hear from u
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
The Smiths...
Millage
16 years 2 months ago
Why thank you Ellie