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I hate you (long version)

I hate the way you dress,
I hate that you are a mess,
I hate your eyes,
I hate your lies,
I hate it when you talk,
I hate the way you walk,
I hate your smile,
I hate your style,
I hate your arms,
I hate your charms,
I hate the way your always there,
But you just dont care,
I hate your face,
I hate your place,
I hate your hands,
I hate your plans,
I hate the way you think,
'I hate it when you drink,'
I hate it when you call,
I hate it all,
I hate that you are true,
I hate you when I'm blue,
I hate you when I sleep,
I hate you very deep,
I hate the way you kiss,
I hate to be like this,
I hate your touch,
I hate you much,
I hate myself more,
I hate that its you I adore,
I hate,I dont you a bit,
I hate,I will have to admit,
I dont hate you,not even small,
I dont hate you at all.


                                               -Lillie Thrasher-

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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

wow

Wow thats a whole lot of hating going around. lol Poet Laurete what is up in your write until I got to the end I guess it was a little rant of love? Let me know if I am right and also is that your beautiful dog by the way. Very nice and I will be back for another visit, now you must do one called I love I love I love etc. lol love magics02 xoxoxox Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Dark.Poetress

Dark.Poetress

16 years 2 months ago

lol

lol ya it was actually,my bf dumped me and i was peeved.yes actually he is his name is Wolverine,but hey hes lucky,the week before i found him i was obsessed with spider man so he was close to being named peter parker,or spidey.lol.lol im not good at happy mushy stuff but ill try man. love poet_laurete, xoxoxox It is far 2 short my friend,on that i agree also.
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BrightEyed

16 years 2 months ago

ha ha

yeah ive totally been there. gah love sux sometimes.. so much easier to pretend like u dont care at all. :) ur friend, bright eyed.
Dark.Poetress

Dark.Poetress

16 years 2 months ago

I most definatly agree,luv

I most definatly agree,luv sucks sometimes but also u move on,you know?like a new beginning I guess you could call it. Your pal, Poet_Laurete